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==Introducing New Edits==
==Introducing New Edits==
I am a student editor at Texas A&M University, and I will be working on this article for the next few weeks. I will be working on various bold edits, including adding more relevant information and completely restructuring the presentation of this article. This article hardly addresses what the "Wars" are. I also do not believe the chart included within the article is relevant. Maybe we could include a link to something similar in a new section of the article. I will continue to update my future plans and edits here on the talk page. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Brybrydawg|Brybrydawg]] ([[User talk:Brybrydawg#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Brybrydawg|contribs]]) 03:52, 2 March 2021 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
I am a student editor at Texas A&M University, and I will be working on this article for the next few weeks. I will be working on various bold edits, including adding more relevant information and completely restructuring the presentation of this article. This article hardly addresses what the "Wars" are. I will continue to update my future plans and edits here on the talk page. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Brybrydawg|Brybrydawg]] ([[User talk:Brybrydawg#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Brybrydawg|contribs]]) 03:52, 2 March 2021 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
===Edit Summary===
So far, I have created several additional headings that should be expanded upon to strengthen this article, including a "history" segment at the beginning and two others that focus on Coke and Pepsi advertising strategies.
My next bold edit was to completely remove the section detailing the lawsuit against Pepsi, as I do not believe it is relevant to the Cola Wars.
Following these edits, I plan to add more (strong) sources and expand upon the new "history" section to provide a solid base to continue this article in the future. [[User:Brybrydawg|Brybrydawg]] ([[User talk:Brybrydawg|talk]]) 04:01, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Revision as of 04:01, 21 March 2021

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 January 2021 and 30 April 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Brybrydawg (article contribs).

Orphaned references in Cola wars

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Cola wars's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Snopes":

  • From New Coke: Mikkelson, Barbara (March 13, 2007). "Knew Coke / New Coke Origin". Snopes.com. Retrieved March 16, 2010.
  • From Dr Pepper: Mikkelson, Barbara (March 20, 2015). "Is Dr Pepper Made from Prune Juice?". Snopes. Retrieved August 12, 2017.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT 08:11, 9 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Introducing New Edits

I am a student editor at Texas A&M University, and I will be working on this article for the next few weeks. I will be working on various bold edits, including adding more relevant information and completely restructuring the presentation of this article. This article hardly addresses what the "Wars" are. I will continue to update my future plans and edits here on the talk page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brybrydawg (talkcontribs) 03:52, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Edit Summary

So far, I have created several additional headings that should be expanded upon to strengthen this article, including a "history" segment at the beginning and two others that focus on Coke and Pepsi advertising strategies. My next bold edit was to completely remove the section detailing the lawsuit against Pepsi, as I do not believe it is relevant to the Cola Wars. Following these edits, I plan to add more (strong) sources and expand upon the new "history" section to provide a solid base to continue this article in the future. Brybrydawg (talk) 04:01, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]