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The caption for the photo passing New Brighton says it's in Canada, but it's clearly of New Brighton on the Mersey. What's the best way to word the caption. Merseyside doesn't sound right for the era. Maybe just 'New Brighton, River Mersey'? |
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Did not have 6 inch guns in casemates ?
The text states this class did not have its 6-inch guns in casemates. But the photos show what looks to me like 6-inch guns in casemates along the side. ?? Rcbutcher (talk) 02:30, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 07:10, 9 January 2019 (UTC)
I will review this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 07:10, 9 January 2019 (UTC)
Lead
- OK, no issues identified
Infobox
- Formatting issue here: Barbettes: 12 in
- Good catch
Design
- Beam dimension doesn't match infobox
- Must've been a typo
- The armour thickness dimensions include conversions to mm although the infobox conversions are to cm
- Fixed
Service history
- "subsequently participated in a blockade by an international force of Montenegro and in an occupation of Scutari to force the Macedonians to relinquish the city to the newly-formed Albania"; suggest "subsequently participated, as part of an international force, in a blockade of Montenegro..." for clarity
- Works for me
Notes/References/Further reading
- No oclc for Jellicoe?
- Added
- Most of the book citations format for further reading don't match the references. specifically date of publication presentation. Also no isbn for Gibbons
- Have updated these.
Other stuff
- Image tags look OK
- One dupe link: destroyer (see final section)
- Fixed
- No dablinks
- External links check out OK although in the external links section it says one is broken. That one works fine for me.
- Works for me too - I'll remove the note
Will check back in a few days. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 01:12, 13 January 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks Zawed. Parsecboy (talk) 15:36, 14 January 2019 (UTC)
- Looks good Parsecboy. I just notice the isbns are formatted inconsistency but won't hold up passing this as GA for that. You will want to get it sorted before going to ACR though. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:11, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks, I'll get to those too. Parsecboy (talk) 12:35, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
- Looks good Parsecboy. I just notice the isbns are formatted inconsistency but won't hold up passing this as GA for that. You will want to get it sorted before going to ACR though. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:11, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
New Brighton
The caption for the photo passing New Brighton says it's in Canada, but it's clearly of New Brighton on the Mersey. What's the best way to word the caption. Merseyside doesn't sound right for the era. Maybe just 'New Brighton, River Mersey'? BPMullins | Talk 03:08, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
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