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Is this an encyclopedia entry, or an advertisement?

Why is a single reviewer's opinion that the car is the "best ever" mentioned right at the start of the article? How is that in any way "neutral", if not accompanied by the criticism of the car, of which there is plenty including from reliable sources? 2001:569:57B2:4D00:580B:CC92:1A3E:2135 (talk) 13:11, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Heya! I'm undergoing a rewrite of this article and I agree with your assessment regarding neutrality on this article. I'll try my best to make it seem less like an ad. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 14:22, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sales by country

The table under the Sales by Country section has percentages for each country of the total worldwide sales...They're all wrong. I don't know how they were calculated but they all appear to be wrong. Someone with more time than me will have to sort that (I'm semi-retired). Thanks ツ Jenova 20 ^(email) 13:58, 8 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Not only that, it hasn't been updated since 2018 or something and the electric car landscape has changed vastly in the meanwhile. Somewhere in the article it says that the Model S is the second best selling car when in fact the Model 3 and Y have eclipsed it long ago. dllu (t,c) 07:20, 22 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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 The table under the Sales by Country section has percentages for each country of the total worldwide sales...They're all wrong. I don't know how they were calculated but they all appear to be wrong. Someone with more time than me will have to sort that (I'm semi-retired).
 Thanks '''[[User:Jenova20|ツ <span style="background:pink"><span style="color:crimson; font-family:comic sans ms">Jenova</span>]][[User_talk:Jenova20|<span style="color:red">20</span>]]</span> <sup>([[Special:EmailUser/Jenova20|email]])</sup>''' 13:58, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
+:Not only that, it hasn't been updated since 2018 or something and the electric car landscape has changed vastly in the meanwhile. Somewhere in the article it says that the Model S is the second best selling car when in fact the Model 3 and Y have eclipsed it long ago. [[user:dllu|dllu]]&nbsp;[[User_talk:dllu|(t]],[[Special:Contributions/Dllu|c)]] 07:20, 22 December 2022 (UTC)