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Thank you! [[User:ES at Global Strategy Group|ES at Global Strategy Group]] ([[User talk:ES at Global Strategy Group|talk]]) 14:57, 25 September 2023 (UTC)
Thank you! [[User:ES at Global Strategy Group|ES at Global Strategy Group]] ([[User talk:ES at Global Strategy Group|talk]]) 14:57, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

:Reaching out to [[User:Drm310]], to see if they would like to review my revised section draft. No pressure, Drm, but since you added my username to the top of this Talk page, I thought I would see if you're interested. [[User:ES at Global Strategy Group|ES at Global Strategy Group]] ([[User talk:ES at Global Strategy Group|talk]]) 13:56, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

Revision as of 13:56, 18 October 2023

Updating History and organization section

Hello,

I'm a Global Strategy Group employee who has been tasked with updating the firm's article. I want to go about this the right way, so I'll be abundantly clear about my COI and will suggest edits rather than making direct changes to the GSG page. For my first request, I wanted to ask if editors would consider making changes to the History and organization section, which currently contains a few inaccuracies and informational gaps. It also lacks secondary sourcing, which I understand is important for substantiating claims on Wikipedia.

If you follow this link, it will take you to a subsection of my user page, where I have uploaded a revised section draft that I believe fixes these issues and improves the section overall. On that page, you will see: 1.) the current section; 2.) my revised section draft; and 3.) a list of all the changes I'm proposing, in the order they appear within the draft.

Please feel free to critique my draft. I've read up on Wikipedia's content guidelines and done my best to make sure all the language I've drafted aligns with it, but I'm obviously an interested party and understand that compromise might be necessary.

Thank you! ES at Global Strategy Group (talk) 14:57, 25 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reaching out to User:Drm310, to see if they would like to review my revised section draft. No pressure, Drm, but since you added my username to the top of this Talk page, I thought I would see if you're interested. ES at Global Strategy Group (talk) 13:56, 18 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]