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Major issues with this article

The #Works section needs some serious renovations. The giant prose should be cleaned up with the Japanese and Korean labels deleted. The table should be re-arranged in a less confusing way. I think it'll be best if we label the columns as "series(if applicable) | original title(Japanese OR Korean, not both) | translated title(English) | published date | remarks"
A lot of the stuff in the #In popular culture section is WP:TOOMUCH and should also be deleted.
The later half of the #Yi Sang and Education section sounds pretty pseudohistorical. Even if it isn't, we need a better source than a Youtube video and the entire section should be summarized with WP:POV stuff deleted.
Lead section is too short
And ofc, sourcing.

I will try and work on whatever I can, but much help is needed. --- 00101984hjw (talk) 17:42, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Major issues with this article ==
+*The #Works section needs some serious renovations. The giant prose should be cleaned up with the Japanese and Korean labels deleted. The table should be re-arranged in a less confusing way. I think it'll be best if we label the columns as "series(if applicable) | original title(Japanese OR Korean, not both) | translated title(English) | published date | remarks"
+*A lot of the stuff in the #In popular culture section is [[WP:TOOMUCH]] and should also be deleted.
+*The later half of the #Yi Sang and Education section sounds pretty pseudohistorical. Even if it isn't, we need a better source than a Youtube [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jQRuG9jDGQ video] and the entire section should be summarized with [[WP:POV]] stuff deleted.
+*Lead section is too short
+*And ofc, sourcing.
+I will try and work on whatever I can, but much help is needed. --- [[User:00101984hjw|00101984hjw]] ([[User talk:00101984hjw|talk]]) 17:42, 8 July 2024 (UTC)