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Style HRH and HH & Other

I do not know if the Aga Khan is a prince. However I believe that he was granted the style His Highness by HM Queen Elisabeth II and that of His Royal Highness by the Shah. The adkn.org website says that this occurred in 1957 and 1959 respectively. I do not know if this is personal or whether it is hereditary.

He was awarded KBE (Knight of the British Empire) and the title "His Highness" by the HM the Queen Elizabeth II.

The titles of prince and princess, which are claimed by children of the Aga Khan by virtue of their descent from Shah Fath Ali Shah of the Persian Qajar dynasty, were recognized as courtesy titles by the British government in 1938.[1] - from this website under Prince Aly Khan.

The style of H.R.H. is nonsense. To be 'Royal' you must be the head of state of a recognised country. The Aga Khan is the head of a religious sect. The style which is recognised in the United Kingdom and elsewhere is 'His Highness'. Therefore the intro should be modified accordingly. Macdonald-ross (talk) 16:17, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The style of HRH is not a nonsense. Aga Khan is the holder of the Title HRH. To be 'Royal' what necessary is to belong to a Royal family. And the thing which u said "Head of the State", i would like u to know that the Aga Khan, in every country of the World, holds the protocol of Head of the State. Enlarge the box where Rank, Name etc are written because in the end two boxes "religion and residence" are hidden. I would also like to put some new fresh & clear picture of Aga Khan on the top of the Article. Also put the flag of the Aga Khan in somewhere in article, and put the Crest of the Aga Khan in the Styles Bar.

Errors

There are some major errors in the content of "Aga Khan IV". For example,

"He married his second wife, Dr. Gabriele zu Leiningen (born in Frankfurt-am-Main on 1 April 1963), in Aiglemont on 30 May 1998. She had formerly been the wife of Karl-Emich, Prince zu Leiningen, and her six year old daughter Princess Cécilia of Leiningen is 111th in line to the throne of the United Kingdom."

The daughter of Karl-Emich, Prince zu Leiningen and Dr. Gabriele zu Leiningen is "Princess Theresa of Leiningen", not "Princess Cécilia of Leiningen". Cécilia is the daughter of Karl-Emich, Prince zu Leiningen and Princess Margarita of Hohenlohe-Oehringen (died in a car accident accident near Freising, Bavaria in 1989). Also Princess Theresa of Leiningen is 112th in line to the throne of United Kingdom.

I believe these errors have been corrected.

Silent Prince Of Islam

HH The Aga Khan is also known as the "Silent Prince Of Islam" because of his services to Muslim Ummah. Also a book titled "Dunya-e-Islam Ka Khamosh Shehzadah" ("Silent Prince Of Muslim World" title: Urdu) was written by Syed Jah Jafferi (a Shi'a writer) in which he presents HH The Aga Khan as the silent prince.

countries

It says in the countries visited west africa. that is a region in africa with many countries FIX IT —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.105.67.58 (talk) 16:13, 24 November 2009 (UTC) This appears corrected 2011-12-07 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.193.116.113 (talk) 23:51, 7 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Neutrality of this article is disputed December 2011

There have been several attempted deletions of content I have added sourced.

I added a bit about finances of the Aga Khan commenting that a fraction comes from tithes, as quoted in the NY Times.^[1]

Additionally, I have added the sections personal finance, yacht, "mazar" of god, and Bahamas dredging controversy. I have also contributed to the marriages and early life section. Since the NOPV I have attempted to adhere very strictly to the NPOV, and BLP polices of wikipedia, and would be happy to have corrections and suggestions. I would appreciate if material is not deleted without reason or reference, and I would also appreciate additional information, such as referenced additional sources of income for example, as this would help to add a more complete picture.

Kind Regards, 67.193.116.113 (talk) 19:28, 14 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

^ Zachary, G. Pascal (9 July 2007). "The Aga Khan, a jet-setter who mixes business and Islam". NY Times. Retrieved 7 December 2011.

[nytimesJetSet-1] Zachary, G. Pascal (9 July 2007). "The Aga Khan, a jet-setter who mixes business and Islam". NY Times. Retrieved 7 December 2011.

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 There have been several attempted deletions of content I have added sourced.
-I discussed the finances of the Aga Khan commenting that a fraction comes from tithes, as quited in the NY Times.<ref name="nytimesJetSet">{{cite news |title=The Aga Khan, a jet-setter who mixes business and Islam |first=G. Pascal |last=Zachary |url=http://www.nytimes.com/2007/07/09/business/worldbusiness/09iht-khan.4.6569846.html?pagewanted=all |newspaper=NY Times |date=9 July 2007 |accessdate=7 December 2011}}</ref>
+I added a bit about finances of the Aga Khan commenting that a fraction comes from tithes, as quoted in the NY Times.<ref name="nytimesJetSet">{{cite news |title=The Aga Khan, a jet-setter who mixes business and Islam |first=G. Pascal |last=Zachary |url=http://www.nytimes.com/2007/07/09/business/worldbusiness/09iht-khan.4.6569846.html?pagewanted=all |newspaper=NY Times |date=9 July 2007 |accessdate=7 December 2011}}</ref>
-Additionally, I have added the sections personals finance, yacht, "mazar of god", and Bahamas Dredging controversy. I have also contributed to the marriages and youth section. I have recently attempted to adhere strictly to the NPV, and BLP polices of wikipedia, and would be happy to have corrections and adjustments. I would appreciate if material is not deleted without reason or reference, and I would also appreciate additional information, such as referenced additional sources of income for example. This would help to add a more complete picture.
+Additionally, I have added the sections personal finance, yacht, "mazar" of god, and Bahamas dredging controversy. I have also contributed to the marriages and early life section. Since the NOPV I have attempted to adhere very strictly to the NPOV, and BLP polices of wikipedia, and would be happy to have corrections and suggestions. I would appreciate if material is not deleted without reason or reference, and I would also appreciate additional information, such as referenced additional sources of income for example, as this would help to add a more complete picture.
 Kind Regards,