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I agree, a rewrite is still in order. I'm gathering refs for it. --[[User:JMax555|JMax555]] ([[User talk:JMax555|talk]]) |
I agree, a rewrite is still in order. I'm gathering refs for it. --[[User:JMax555|JMax555]] ([[User talk:JMax555|talk]]) |
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I just did the first editing pass on reformatting the article. I'm searching out more citations now. [[User:JMax555|JMax555]] ([[User talk:JMax555|talk]]) 18:17, 9 September 2018 (UTC) |
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I removed the statement that Patrick McCollum was the first Wiccan Chaplain recognized by the Government. Ed Fitch served as a special duty Chaplain while in the Air National Guard and Scott Russell served as a Chaplain for FEMA, responding to Ground Zero during the 9-11 attacks. Runeman11 03:53, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
- Can someone write an opening paragraph on Patrick McCollum? It just launches right in. Alos i am removing the christianity portal tag, I dont know why it is here. Sephiroth storm (talk) 14:33, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
List of Pagans page
I added a link to this article on the List of Pagans page, under Wiccans. Lily20 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 18:38, 29 January 2010 (UTC).
Total ReWrite
This article needs wither a total rewrite or it needs to be deleted. It's so biased it's crazy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.101.240.69 (talk) 09:56, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- Yes it reads like a self-promotional or fan piece. Much of it seems to be taken from http://www.patrickmccollum.org/ - which looks like a questionable self-published source. Chris Fynn (talk) 14:01, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
- Much better now after NeilN's revisions.Chris Fynn (talk) 19:13, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks Chris Fynn. Hopefully it stays that way. --NeilN talk to me 15:50, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
- Much better now after NeilN's revisions.Chris Fynn (talk) 19:13, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
I agree, a rewrite is still in order. I'm gathering refs for it. --JMax555 (talk)
I just did the first editing pass on reformatting the article. I'm searching out more citations now. JMax555 (talk) 18:17, 9 September 2018 (UTC)