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This section is written in very poor English, suggesting that the writer is not a native speaker. The first sentence is almost gibberish, with a marriage that "is not clear", and the remainder switching confusingly between verb tenses, including a typo ("was hold") and then a description of the tables and the diamond in the present tense - and, quite frankly, who on earth could possibly care about such silly details, any more than about what outfits women wear at society weddings? This is supposed to be an encyclopaedia, not a gossip column. If information is "not clear", don't include it.213.127.210.95 (talk) 15:58, 20 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Revision as of 15:58, 20 October 2018 edit 213.127.210.95 (talk) Attention drawn to unclear use of English.~~~~ ← Previous edit		Revision as of 15:59, 20 October 2018 edit undo 213.127.210.95 (talk) Minor typo in my previous edit corrected.~~~~ Next edit →
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	== Personal Life section ==		== Personal Life section ==
	This section is written in ~~almost~~ very poor English, suggesting that the writer is not a native speaker. The first sentence is almost gibberish, with a marriage that "is not clear", and the remainder switching confusingly between verb tenses, including a typo ("was hold") and then a description of the tables and the diamond in the present tense - and, quite frankly, who on earth could possibly care about such silly details, any more than about what outfits women wear at society weddings? This is supposed to be an encyclopaedia, not a gossip column. If information is "not clear", don't include it.[[Special:Contributions/213.127.210.95\|213.127.210.95]] ([[User talk:213.127.210.95\|talk]]) 15:58, 20 October 2018 (UTC)		This section is written in very poor English, suggesting that the writer is not a native speaker. The first sentence is almost gibberish, with a marriage that "is not clear", and the remainder switching confusingly between verb tenses, including a typo ("was hold") and then a description of the tables and the diamond in the present tense - and, quite frankly, who on earth could possibly care about such silly details, any more than about what outfits women wear at society weddings? This is supposed to be an encyclopaedia, not a gossip column. If information is "not clear", don't include it.[[Special:Contributions/213.127.210.95\|213.127.210.95]] ([[User talk:213.127.210.95\|talk]]) 15:58, 20 October 2018 (UTC)