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Some proposed changes

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Hello - I am looking to update the West Pharmaceutical Services Wikipedia page on behalf of Green Room Communications, an agency that works with West. Below, I've listed requested edits, explanations, and links where possible for these suggested changes and for your consideration. I have broken down suggested changes according to sections. Please let me know if you have any questions or if anything else is needed - thanks so much in advance.

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SECTION: OVERVIEW/BOX ABOUT WEST

Information to be added or removed: In the overview section/box of "West Pharmaceutical Services" containing the information of Logo, Type, Traded as, Industry, Founded, we would like to request several edits to a few sections in line with West Pharma's 2018 Annual Report.

1. In the "Revenue" line, please update to read "US $1.7 billion (2018)¹"

2. In the "Operating income" line, please update to "Operating profit" and update the number to "US $240.3 million (2018)¹"

3. In the "Net Income" line, please update to "US $206.9 million¹"

4. In the "Number of Employees" line, please update to "7,700 (2018)¹"

Explanation of issue: To ensure the content is most up to date, we want to provide the most recent information available per the 2018 annual report.

References supporting change: ¹ https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4

SECTION: INTRODUCTORY UPFRONT

Information to be added or removed: 1: With the introductory upfront, please change the first sentence to read "West Pharmaceutical Services, Inc. is a designer and manufacturer of pharmaceutical packaging components and delivery systems for injectable drugs and healthcare products."

Explanation of issue: We'd like to clarify the company's work in the manufacturing and design areas.

References supporting change: N/A

SECTION: OVERVIEW

Information to be added or removed: 1: Please adjust the first sentence to read "West manufactures packaging components and delivery systems for injectable drugs and healthcare products²."

2: Also, after this sentence, please add "Working by the side of its customers from concept to patient, West creates products that promote the efficiency, reliability and safety of the world's pharmaceutical drug supply. West is headquartered in Exton, Pennsylvania, and supports its customers from locations in North and South America, Europe, Asia and Australia. West's 2018 sales of $1.7 billion¹ reflect the daily use of approximately 112 million of its components and devices, which are designed to improve the delivery of healthcare to patients around the world."

3: Likewise, please remove the second sentence ("West has been ranked a 'Top Workplace' in the Greater-Philadelphia area by Philly.com in 2010, 2011, and 2012.") and replace with "West was the winner of the CPhl Excellence in Pharma: Corporate Social Responsibility Award" in 2018¹.

Explanation of issue: We'd like to provide additional information about the company, products, and general information.

References supporting change: ¹https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4 (specifically information from page 3) ²https://www.westpharma.com/en/about-west

SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, ASIA PACIFIC

Information to be added or removed:

1: Immediately following the heading "Asia/Pacfic", please begin the section with: Australia, Belrose (begin indented on second line) West Pharmaceutical Services Australia Pty Ltd

2: Additionally, at the end of this section, please add the following: Bangalore (begin indented on second line) West Pharmaceutical Services, Inc. (Digital Technology Center)

3: Explanation of issue: Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018. References supporting change: N/A

SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, EUROPE/MIDDLE EAST

Information to be added or removed:

1: Please remove the second entry, as follows: Denmark, Roskilde West Pharmaceutical Engineering Denmark

2: For the third entry beginning with "England , Bodmin", please update to: "England, Bodmin Cornwall"

3: For the entry titled "Israel, Ra'anana", please remove the second line underneath with text "Medimop Medical Projects, Ltd" and update to "West Pharma. Services IL, Ltd."

Explanation of issue: Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018.

References supporting change: N/A

SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, NORTH AMERICA

Information to be added or removed:

1: Please update the first entry (Arizona, Phoenix) and remove "The Tech Group Phoenix" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West"

2: Please update the second entry (Arizona, Scottsdale) and remove "West - Corporate and Engineering Center" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West "

3: Please update the third entry (Arizona, Tempe) and remove "The Tech Group Tempe- Rockford The Tech Group Tempe - West" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West"

4. Please update the fourth entry (Florida, Clearwater)and adjust the second line to read "West Pharmaceutical Services of Florida, Inc."

5: Please update the fifth entry (Florida, St. Petersburg)and adjust the second line to read "West Pharmaceutical Services of Florida, Inc."

6: Please remove the sixth entry in its entirety ("Indiana, Frankfort The Tech Group Indiana)

7: Please update the "México, Cuernavaca" entry and remove the second plant bullet ("Aluplast")

8: Please update the "Michigan, Walker" entry to read "Michigan, Grand Rapids"; likewise, please update the second line below ("The Tech Group Michigan") to read "The Tech Group Grand Rapids Inc d/b/a West Contract Manufacturing"

9: Please update the "Puerto Rico, Cayey" and adjust the second line, remove "The Tech Group Puerto Rico" and replace with "West Contract Manufacturing, LLC"

10: Please remove the last entry in its entirety ("Texas, Athens West Advanced Injection Systems")

Explanation of issue: Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018.

References supporting change: N/A

GreenRoomWest (talk) 18:52, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 04-JUN-2019

Unable to review edit request

Your edit request could not be reviewed because the provided references are not formatted correctly.^[a] The citation style predominantly used by the West Pharmaceutical Services article is Citation Style 1 (CS1). The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's.^[b] Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.)
Additionally, the COI editor has not made the necessary disclosures.

In the extended section below titled Citation style, I have illustrated two examples: one showing how the edit request was submitted, and another showing how requests should be submitted in the future:

Citation style

Bare URL reference formatting:

The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,^[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.^[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.^[3]

References

1. https://www.booksource.com
2. http://www.journalsource.com
3. http://www.websource.com

In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the West Pharmaceutical Services article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:

Citation Style 1 formatting:

The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,<ref>{{cite book|last1=Sjöblad|first1=Tristan|title=The Sun|url=http://www.booksource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2018|page=1}}</ref> while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.<ref>{{cite journal|last1=Harinath|first1=Paramjit|title=Size of the Moon|journal=Science|issue=78|volume=51|url=http://www.journalsource.com|date=2018|page=46}}</ref> The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.<ref>{{cite web|last1=Uemura|first1=Shu|title=The Sun's Heat|url=http://www.websource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2018|page=2}}</ref>
Displays as:

The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,^[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.^[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.^[3]

References

^ Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2018, p. 1.

^ Harinath, Paramjit. "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.

^ Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2018, p. 2.

In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review.

Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo 02:01, 5 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

^ The fault for this formatting error may have originated with the automated prompts used by the edit request template, which asks for a COI editor to "supply the URL of any references used". While the resulting omission of information would not be the fault of the requesting COI editor, it nevertheless remains their responsibility to supply the references formatted in the style used by the article.
^ The use of bare URLs as references is a style which is acceptable for use in Wikipedia. However, general practice dictates that the style already in use for an article be the one that is subsequently used for all future additions unless changed by editorial consensus.^[1]

References

^ "WP:CITEVAR - Wikipedia:Citing sources". Wikipedia. 20 October 2018. Retrieved 22 October 2018. Guideline: It is normal practice to defer to the style used by the first major contributor or adopted by the consensus of editors already working on the page, unless a change in consensus has been achieved. If the article you are editing is already using a particular citation style, you should follow it.

Resubmitted Proposed Changes

The following Wikipedia contributor has declared a personal or professional connection to the subject of this article. Relevant policies and guidelines may include conflict of interest, autobiography, and neutral point of view.

GreenRoomWest (talk · contribs) This user has declared a connection. ((Optional) Employed by Green Room Communications who is the PR agency of West Pharmaceutical Services who has requested to reach out with the below suggestions.)

Some proposed changes

It is requested that an edit be made to the semi-protected article at West Pharmaceutical Services. (edit · history · last · links · protection log)

This template must be followed by a complete and specific description of the request, that is, specify what text should be removed and a verbatim copy of the text that should replace it. "Please change X" is not acceptable and will be rejected; the request must be of the form "please change X to Y".

The edit may be made by any autoconfirmed user. Remember to change the |answered=no parameter to "yes" when the request has been accepted, rejected or on hold awaiting user input. This is so that inactive or completed requests don't needlessly fill up the edit requests category. You may also wish to use the {{ESp}} template in the response. To request that a page be protected or unprotected, make a protection request.

Hello - this a resubmit of the previous edit, reformatting the references per Spintendo's insights. Likewise, I would like to disclose once more that I am reaching out on behalf of Green Room Communications, of which West Pharmaceuticals is a client of ours. If any additional disclosures are needed, please let me know. Thank you!

Below, you will find the adjusted changes according to the correct format.

SECTION: OVERVIEW/BOX ABOUT WEST

Information to be added or removed: In the overview section/box of "West Pharmaceutical Services" containing the information of Logo, Type, Traded as, Industry, Founded, we would like to request several edits to a few sections in line with West Pharma's 2018 Annual Report.

1. In the "Revenue" line, please update to read "US $1.7 billion (2018) ^[1]

2. In the "Operating income" line, please update to "Operating profit" and update the number to "US $240.3 million (2018) ^[2]

3. In the "Net Income" line, please update to "US $206.9 million (2018)^[3]

4. In the "Number of Employees" line, please update to "7,700 (2018) ^[4]

Explanation of issue: To ensure the content is most up to date, we want to provide the most recent information available per the 2018 annual report.

References supporting change: The full link to the reference above is here: https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4. All information is pulled from this report, but page numbers are detailed below. Additionally, I have listed out the references below according to the Citation 1 format seen on the West Pharmaceutical Wikipedia page: 1. Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 3. Retrieved 5 June 2019. 2. Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 21. Retrieved 5 June 2019. 3. Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 21. Retrieved 5 June 2019. 4. Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 7. Retrieved 5 June 2019.

SECTION: INTRODUCTORY UPFRONT

Information to be added or removed:

1: With the introductory upfront, please change the first sentence to read "West Pharmaceutical Services, Inc. is a designer and manufacturer of pharmaceutical packaging components and delivery systems for injectable drugs and healthcare products."

Explanation of issue: We'd like to clarify the company's work in the manufacturing and design areas.

References supporting change: N/A

SECTION: OVERVIEW

Information to be added or removed: 1: Please adjust the first sentence to read "West manufactures packaging components and delivery systems for injectable drugs and healthcare products^[5]

2: Also, after this sentence, please add "Working by the side of its customers from concept to patient, West creates products that promote the efficiency, reliability and safety of the world's pharmaceutical drug supply. West is headquartered in Exton, Pennsylvania, and supports its customers from locations in North and South America, Europe, Asia and Australia. West's 2018 sales of $1.7 billion^[6] reflect the daily use of approximately 112 million of its components and devices, which are designed to improve the delivery of healthcare to patients around the world."

3: Likewise, please remove the second sentence ("West has been ranked a 'Top Workplace' in the Greater-Philadelphia area by Philly.com in 2010, 2011, and 2012.") and replace with "West was the winner of the CPhl Excellence in Pharma: Corporate Social Responsibility Award" in 2018^[7]^[8]. Additionally in 2019, West’s NovaGuard SA Pro safety system won an award at the India Packaging Awards for Excellence in Enhanced User Experience and Excellence in Packaging Design – Shapes and Structures^[9]^[10].

Explanation of issue: We'd like to provide additional information about the company, products, and general information.

References supporting change: References are built out with links below and formatting according to References layout as seen on West Pharmaceutical Wiki page. 1. About West. West Pharmaceutical Services. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://www.westpharma.com/en/about-west ) 2. About West. West Pharmaceutical Services. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://www.westpharma.com/en/about-west ) 3. Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 3. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4 4. Pharmaceutical Technology Editors. (October 10, 2018). Meet the 2019 CPhl Pharma Awards Winners. Pharmaceutical Technology. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: http://www.pharmtech.com/meet-2018-cphi-pharma-awards-winners) 5. Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 2. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4 6. West NovaGuard SA Pro Safety System Recognized for Excellence in Design and User Experience at the India Packaging Awards. (May 22, 2019). West. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://investor.westpharma.com/news-releases/news-release-details/west-novaguardr-sa-pro-safety-system-recognized-excellence) 7. Allen, Daphne. (May 22, 2019) Supplier Stories for the week of May 19. Medical Device and Diagnostic Industry. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://www.mddionline.com/supplier-stories-week-may-19)

SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, ASIA PACIFIC

Information to be added or removed:

1: Immediately following the heading "Asia/Pacfic", please begin the section with: Australia, Belrose (begin indented on second line) West Pharmaceutical Services Australia Pty Ltd

2: Additionally, at the end of this section, please add the following: Bangalore (begin indented on second line) West Pharmaceutical Services, Inc. (Digital Technology Center)

Explanation of issue: Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018.

References supporting change: N/A

SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, EUROPE/MIDDLE EAST

Information to be added or removed:

1: Please remove the second entry, as follows: Denmark, Roskilde West Pharmaceutical Engineering Denmark

2: For the third entry beginning with "England , Bodmin", please update to: "England, Bodmin Cornwall"

3: For the entry titled "Israel, Ra'anana", please remove the second line underneath with text "Medimop Medical Projects, Ltd" and update to "West Pharma. Services IL, Ltd."

Explanation of issue: Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018.

References supporting change: N/A

SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, NORTH AMERICA

Information to be added or removed:

1: Please update the first entry (Arizona, Phoenix) and remove "The Tech Group Phoenix" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West"

2: Please update the second entry (Arizona, Scottsdale) and remove "West - Corporate and Engineering Center" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West"

3: Please update the third entry (Arizona, Tempe) and remove "The Tech Group Tempe- Rockford The Tech Group Tempe - West" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West"

4. Please update the fourth entry (Florida, Clearwater) and adjust the second line to read "West Pharmaceutical Services of Florida, Inc."

5: Please update the fifth entry (Florida, St. Petersburg) and adjust the second line to read "West Pharmaceutical Services of Florida, Inc."

6: Please remove the sixth entry in its entirety ("Indiana, Frankfort The Tech Group Indiana)

7: Please update the "México, Cuernavaca" entry and remove the second plant bullet ("Aluplast")

8: Please update the "Michigan, Walker" entry to read "Michigan, Grand Rapids"; likewise, please update the second line below ("The Tech Group Michigan") to read "The Tech Group Grand Rapids Inc d/b/a West Contract Manufacturing"

9: Please update the "Puerto Rico, Cayey" and adjust the second line, remove "The Tech Group Puerto Rico" and replace with "West Contract Manufacturing, LLC"

10: Please remove the last entry in its entirety ("Texas, Athens West Advanced Injection Systems")

Explanation of issue: Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018.

References supporting change: N/A

GreenRoomWest (talk) 17:20, 6 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

^ West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 3. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)
^ West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 21. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)
^ West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 21. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)
^ West (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 7. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)
^ West Pharmaceutical Services. "About West". West Pharmaceutical Services. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)
^ West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 3. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)
^ Pharmaceutical Technology Editors (October 10, 2018). "Meet the 2019 CPhl Pharma Awards Winners". West Pharmaceutical Services. {{cite web}}: |last1= has generic name (help); Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)
^ West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 2. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved 5 June 2019" ignored (help)
^ West Pharmaceutical Services (May 22, 2019). "West NovaGuard SA Pro Safety System Recognized for Excellence in Design and User Experience at the India Packaging Awards". West Pharmaceutical Services. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)
^ Allen, Daphne (May 22, 2018). "Supplier Stories for the Week of May 19". Medical Device and Diagnostic Industry. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[noteFoot01a] Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2018, p. 1.

[noteFoot02a] Harinath, Paramjit. "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.

[noteFoot03a] Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2018, p. 2.

[1] The fault for this formatting error may have originated with the automated prompts used by the edit request template, which asks for a COI editor to "supply the URL of any references used". While the resulting omission of information would not be the fault of the requesting COI editor, it nevertheless remains their responsibility to supply the references formatted in the style used by the article.

[3] The use of bare URLs as references is a style which is acceptable for use in Wikipedia. However, general practice dictates that the style already in use for an article be the one that is subsequently used for all future additions unless changed by editorial consensus.^[1]

[2] "WP:CITEVAR - Wikipedia:Citing sources". Wikipedia. 20 October 2018. Retrieved 22 October 2018. Guideline: It is normal practice to defer to the style used by the first major contributor or adopted by the consensus of editors already working on the page, unless a change in consensus has been achieved. If the article you are editing is already using a particular citation style, you should follow it.

[4] West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 3. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[5] West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 21. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[6] West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 21. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[7] West (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 7. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[8] West Pharmaceutical Services. "About West". West Pharmaceutical Services. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[9] West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 3. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[10] Pharmaceutical Technology Editors (October 10, 2018). "Meet the 2019 CPhl Pharma Awards Winners". West Pharmaceutical Services. {{cite web}}: |last1= has generic name (help); Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[11] West Pharmaceutical Services (2018). "Annual Report 2018". West Pharmaceutical Services. p. 2. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved 5 June 2019" ignored (help)

[12] West Pharmaceutical Services (May 22, 2019). "West NovaGuard SA Pro Safety System Recognized for Excellence in Design and User Experience at the India Packaging Awards". West Pharmaceutical Services. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

[13] Allen, Daphne (May 22, 2018). "Supplier Stories for the Week of May 19". Medical Device and Diagnostic Industry. {{cite web}}: Text "Retrieved June 5, 2019" ignored (help)

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+== Resubmitted Proposed Changes ==
+{{Connected contributor|User1=GreenRoomWest|U1-declared=yes| U1-otherlinks=(Optional) Employed by Green Room Communications who is the PR agency of West Pharmaceutical Services who has requested to reach out with the below suggestions.}}
+==Some proposed changes==
+{{request edit}}
+Hello - this a resubmit of the previous edit, reformatting the references per Spintendo's insights. Likewise, I would like to disclose once more that I am reaching out on behalf of Green Room Communications, of which West Pharmaceuticals is a client of ours. If any additional disclosures are needed, please let me know. Thank you!
+Below, you will find the adjusted changes according to the correct format.
+SECTION: OVERVIEW/BOX ABOUT WEST
+'''Information to be added or removed:'''
+In the overview section/box of "West Pharmaceutical Services" containing the information of Logo, Type, Traded as, Industry, Founded, we would like to request several edits to a few sections in line with West Pharma's 2018 Annual Report.
+'''1.''' In the "Revenue" line, please update to read "US $1.7 billion (2018) <ref>{{cite web|last1=West Pharmaceutical Services|first1= |title=Annual Report 2018|url= https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4 |publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services|date=2018|page=3|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref>
+'''2.''' In the "Operating income" line, please update to "Operating profit" and update the number to "US $240.3 million (2018) <ref>{{cite web|last1=West Pharmaceutical Services|first1= |title=Annual Report 2018|url= https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4|publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services|date=2018|page=21|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref>
+'''3.''' In the "Net Income" line, please update to "US $206.9 million (2018)<ref>{{cite web|last1=West Pharmaceutical Services|first1= |title=Annual Report 2018|url= https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4|publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services|date=2018|page=21|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref>
+'''4.''' In the "Number of Employees" line, please update to "7,700 (2018) <ref>{{cite web|last1=West|first1= |title=Annual Report 2018|url= https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4|publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services|date=2018|page=7|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref>
+'''Explanation of issue:''' To ensure the content is most up to date, we want to provide the most recent information available per the 2018 annual report.
+'''References supporting change:'''
+The full link to the reference above is here: https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4. All information is pulled from this report, but page numbers are detailed below. Additionally, I have listed out the references below according to the Citation 1 format seen on the West Pharmaceutical Wikipedia page:
+.	Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 3. Retrieved 5 June 2019.
+.	Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 21. Retrieved 5 June 2019.
+.	Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 21. Retrieved 5 June 2019.
+.	Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 7. Retrieved 5 June 2019.
+SECTION: INTRODUCTORY UPFRONT
+'''Information to be added or removed:'''
+'''1:''' With the introductory upfront, please change the first sentence to read "'''West Pharmaceutical Services, Inc.''' is a designer and manufacturer of pharmaceutical packaging components and delivery systems for injectable drugs and healthcare products."
+'''Explanation of issue:''' We'd like to clarify the company's work in the manufacturing and design areas.
+'''References supporting change:''' N/A
+SECTION: OVERVIEW
+'''Information to be added or removed:'''
+'''1:''' Please adjust the first sentence to read "West manufactures packaging components and delivery systems for injectable drugs and healthcare products<ref>{{cite web|last1=West Pharmaceutical Services|first1= |title=About West |url= https://www.westpharma.com/en/about-west |publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services |date= |page=|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref>
+'''2:''' Also, after this sentence, please add "Working by the side of its customers from concept to patient, West creates products that promote the efficiency, reliability and safety of the world's pharmaceutical drug supply. West is headquartered in Exton, Pennsylvania, and supports its customers from locations in North and South America, Europe, Asia and Australia. West's 2018 sales of $1.7 billion<ref>{{cite web|last1=West Pharmaceutical Services|first1= |title=Annual Report 2018|url= https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4 |publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services |date=2018|page=3|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref> reflect the daily use of approximately 112 million of its components and devices, which are designed to improve the delivery of healthcare to patients around the world."
+'''3:''' Likewise, please remove the second sentence ("West has been ranked a 'Top Workplace' in the Greater-Philadelphia area by Philly.com in 2010, 2011, and 2012.") and replace with "West was the winner of the CPhl Excellence in Pharma: Corporate Social Responsibility Award" in 2018<ref>{{cite web|last1=Pharmaceutical Technology Editors|first1= |title=Meet the 2019 CPhl Pharma Awards Winners|url=http://www.pharmtech.com/meet-2018-cphi-pharma-awards-winners|publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services|date=October 10, 2018|page=|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref><ref>{{cite web|last1=West Pharmaceutical Services|first1= |title=Annual Report 2018|url= https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4|publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services|date=2018|page=2|Retrieved 5 June 2019}}</ref>. Additionally in 2019, West’s NovaGuard SA Pro safety system won an award at the India Packaging Awards for Excellence in Enhanced User Experience and Excellence in Packaging Design – Shapes and Structures<ref>{{cite web|last1=West Pharmaceutical Services|first1= |title=West NovaGuard SA Pro Safety System Recognized for Excellence in Design and User Experience at the India Packaging Awards|url=https://investor.westpharma.com/news-releases/news-release-details/west-novaguardr-sa-pro-safety-system-recognized-excellence|publisher=West Pharmaceutical Services|date=May 22, 2019|page=|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref><ref>{{cite web|last1=Allen|first1=Daphne |title=Supplier Stories for the Week of May 19|url=https://www.mddionline.com/supplier-stories-week-may-19|publisher=Medical Device and Diagnostic Industry |date=May 22, 2018|page=|Retrieved June 5, 2019}}</ref>.
+'''Explanation of issue:''' We'd like to provide additional information about the company, products, and general information.
+'''References supporting change:'''
+References are built out with links below and formatting according to References layout as seen on West Pharmaceutical Wiki page.
+.	About West. West Pharmaceutical Services. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://www.westpharma.com/en/about-west )
+.	About West. West Pharmaceutical Services. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://www.westpharma.com/en/about-west )
+.	Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 3. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4
+.	Pharmaceutical Technology Editors. (October 10, 2018). Meet the 2019 CPhl Pharma Awards Winners. Pharmaceutical Technology. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: http://www.pharmtech.com/meet-2018-cphi-pharma-awards-winners)
+.	Annual Report 2018. (PDF). West. p. 2. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://investor.westpharma.com/static-files/b00f6db7-744e-40fe-b892-b8df553940c4
+.	West NovaGuard SA Pro Safety System Recognized for Excellence in Design and User Experience at the India Packaging Awards. (May 22, 2019). West. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://investor.westpharma.com/news-releases/news-release-details/west-novaguardr-sa-pro-safety-system-recognized-excellence)
+.	Allen, Daphne. (May 22, 2019) Supplier Stories for the week of May 19. Medical Device and Diagnostic Industry. Retrieved 5 June 2019. (URL for reference: https://www.mddionline.com/supplier-stories-week-may-19)
+SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, ASIA PACIFIC
+'''Information to be added or removed:'''
+'''1:''' Immediately following the heading "Asia/Pacfic", please begin the section with:
+Australia, Belrose
+	(begin indented on second line) West Pharmaceutical Services Australia Pty Ltd
+'''2:''' Additionally, at the end of this section, please add the following:
+Bangalore
+	(begin indented on second line) West Pharmaceutical Services, Inc. (Digital Technology Center)
+'''Explanation of issue:''' Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018.
+'''References supporting change:''' N/A
+SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, EUROPE/MIDDLE EAST
+'''Information to be added or removed:'''
+'''1:''' Please remove the second entry, as follows:
+Denmark, Roskilde
+	West Pharmaceutical Engineering Denmark
+'''2:''' For the third entry beginning with "England , Bodmin", please update to: "England, Bodmin Cornwall"
+'''3:''' For the entry titled "Israel, Ra'anana", please remove the second line underneath with text "Medimop Medical Projects, Ltd" and update to "West Pharma. Services IL, Ltd."
+'''Explanation of issue:''' Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018.
+'''References supporting change''': N/A
+SECTION: MANUFACTURING PLANTS, NORTH AMERICA
+'''Information to be added or removed:'''
+'''1:''' Please update the first entry (Arizona, Phoenix) and remove "The Tech Group Phoenix" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West"
+'''2:''' Please update the second entry (Arizona, Scottsdale) and remove "West - Corporate and Engineering Center" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West"
+'''3:''' Please update the third entry (Arizona, Tempe) and remove "The Tech Group Tempe- Rockford
+The Tech Group Tempe - West" and replace with "Tech Group North America, Inc. d/b/a West"
+'''4.''' Please update the fourth entry (Florida, Clearwater) and adjust the second line to read "West Pharmaceutical Services of Florida, Inc."
+'''5:''' Please update the fifth entry (Florida, St. Petersburg) and adjust the second line to read "West Pharmaceutical Services of Florida, Inc."
+'''6:''' Please remove the sixth entry in its entirety ("Indiana, Frankfort The Tech Group Indiana)
+'''7:''' Please update the "México, Cuernavaca" entry and remove the second plant bullet ("Aluplast")
+'''8:''' Please update the "Michigan, Walker" entry to read "Michigan, Grand Rapids"; likewise, please update the second line below ("The Tech Group Michigan") to read "The Tech Group Grand Rapids Inc d/b/a West Contract Manufacturing"
+'''9:''' Please update the "Puerto Rico, Cayey" and adjust the second line, remove "The Tech Group Puerto Rico" and replace with "West Contract Manufacturing, LLC"
+'''10:''' Please remove the last entry in its entirety ("Texas, Athens West Advanced Injection Systems")
+'''Explanation of issue:''' Adding and removing manufacturing plants as of 2018.
+'''References supporting change:''' N/A
+[[User:GreenRoomWest|GreenRoomWest]] ([[User talk:GreenRoomWest|talk]]) 17:20, 6 June 2019 (UTC)