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New sections(s) - homeostasis, types of blood, types of arteries, etc.

Seems to me that while this article does a good job of defining the different types of circulatory systems, it does very little to go in-depth with them. The section on its discovery is longer than them, for Heaven's sake. So, I propose a new section dealing with the specificities of each type of circulatory system.

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bypass surgery has to do with the circulatory system. it is necessary when one of the veins or arteries in the system becomes clogged (usually by plasmids which are in charge of blood clotting) and therefore is rendered useless. the word bypass means to pass over so this surgery takes a vein from either the leg or another place on the heard and attached it to allow the blood to continue to flow around the clot 207.89.46.244 (talk) 19:34, 7 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. —KuyaBriBri^Talk 19:50, 7 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

(edit conflict) Coronary artery bypass surgery is already linked within the article. Unless we're adding descriptions of the myriad other surgical procedures that can be performed on the circulatory system, I don't see this as an appropriate addition to this article. ‑‑ElHef (Meep?) 20:04, 7 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

circulatory system

How do the deoxygenated blood moves ???? Tanya1023 (talk) 15:58, 10 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Not done: The answer is in this section, but the talk page is not for answering questions that can be obtained in the article or its sources, such as a medical textbook or summary review on the circulatory system, such as this. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. --Zefr (talk) 17:00, 10 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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The picture to the right of the "Arteries" section appears to be incorrect. On top it has the text "Pulmonary artery" as part of the "Veins" group, and "Pulmonary vein" as part of the "Arteries" group. 50.79.1.225 (talk) 20:39, 21 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done - correct. The image is mislabeled, as you say, and does not convey unique information used to support content. I removed it. --Zefr (talk) 20:50, 21 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Open and closed circulatory systems need better explanations

The sections titled Open circulatory system and Closed circulatory system each say some things about the two types of systems.

But they neglect to say what makes an "open" circulatory system be classified as "open", or what makes a "closed" circulatory system be classified as "closed".

This is a serious omission. I hope someone knowledgeable about this can improve those sections.173.166.233.97 (talk) 17:12, 30 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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 {{Done}} - correct. The image is mislabeled, as you say, and does not convey unique information used to support content. I removed it. --[[User:Zefr|Zefr]] ([[User talk:Zefr|talk]]) 20:50, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
+== Open and closed circulatory systems need better explanations ==
+The sections titled '''Open circulatory system''' and '''Closed circulatory system''' each say some things about the two types of systems.
+But they neglect to say what makes an "open" circulatory system be classified as "open", or what makes a "closed" circulatory system be classified as "closed".
+This is a serious omission. I hope someone knowledgeable about this can improve those sections.[[Special:Contributions/173.166.233.97|173.166.233.97]] ([[User talk:173.166.233.97|talk]]) 17:12, 30 December 2020 (UTC)