Template:Did you know nominations/Marilyn Gayle Hoff
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The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk) 16:28, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
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Marilyn Gayle Hoff
- ... that American author Marilyn Gayle Hoff was honored by a Fourth of July parade float? Source: Newspapers.com
Moved to mainspace by JaneClawsten (talk) and Beccaynr (talk). Nominated by SL93 (talk) at 15:58, 19 November 2022 (UTC).
Everything seems to check out with this one: new & long enough, no overt NPOV issues, no obvious copyvio, hook is interesting, QPQ done... I'm just going to assume good faith on the numerous offline sources. Cheers, --Kingoflettuce (talk) 08:15, 20 November 2022 (UTC)- Could we work in the "Unsung heroes procession: activists, whistleblowers and muckrackers" quote? The hook comes across as a little routine at the moment. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 03:33, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
- ... that American author Marilyn Gayle Hoff was honored by a Fourth of July parade float as an unsung hero? SL93 (talk) 17:10, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
- Hmm, I was thinking something more like: theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 20:33, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
... that American author Marilyn Gayle Hoff in a Fourth of July float parade of "unsung heroes ... activists, whistleblowers, and muckrackers"?
- theleekycauldron I think that seems too long and sounds awkward. That also goes if I'm reading it correctly with the mistakes. SL93 (talk) 20:58, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
Fair enough, I suppose i'll approve your version :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 20:54, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
- theleekycauldron I think that seems too long and sounds awkward. That also goes if I'm reading it correctly with the mistakes. SL93 (talk) 20:58, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
- ... that American author Marilyn Gayle Hoff was honored by a Fourth of July parade float as an unsung hero? SL93 (talk) 17:10, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
