Template:Did you know nominations/2022 South Ayrshire Council election

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The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 02:19, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

2022 South Ayrshire Council election

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... that the presenting of candidates by the Scottish Family and Alba Party in the 2022 South Ayrshire Council election is the first time they've ever done so in a South Ayrshire council election? Source: https://www.dailyrecord.co.uk/ayrshire/scottish-council-elections-2022-south-26596464
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Soony Saad

Improved to Good Article status by Stevie fae Scotland (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 02:47, 18 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/2022 South Ayrshire Council election; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Other problems: - I'm wary of accepting Daily Record as a reliable source, given its ties to the Daily Mirror (listed as questionable at RSP) and the political nature of this article's topic.

Hook eligibility:

Cited: - Daily Record does not mention Scottish Family at all, nor does it mention that it was the first for Alba Party.
Interesting: - As it stands, it's quite boring and wordy. The hook can be trimmed to simply state that it was the first with those parties ("presenting of candidates" is unclear compared to "fielded" as the article prose uses), but it's still not hooky.

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Sounder Bruce 01:29, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

Withdrawing as I've raised concerns about the review on the GAN talk page. Onegreatjoke (talk) 02:47, 19 May 2023 (UTC)