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Box Office Section
I just completed a substantial overhaul of the "Box Office" section. It was badly in need of grammar, punctuation, and syntax correction. I also removed about half of the initial portion of the second paragraph, which detailed the fourth, fifth, and sixth weeks of "Precious'" theatrical release. There were several sentences detailing the rapid decline in box office revenues, and I decided to be bold and summarize the information, without individual statistics, in one transitional sentence. We can discuss whether or not those specific numbers are crucial to the article, but since most every film experiences a substantial decrease in revenue with each week of release, I do not think the information was necessary.
On another note, the revisions in sentence structure and modifier placement were all predicated on the accuracy of the information. I assumed that the numbers were correctly referenced, given that boxofficemojo.com is pretty accurate in its postings.Kp.murphy (talk) 16:29, 10 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Cast
The girl's name is Consuelo, NOT Consuela. This is a Spanish name that, although female, breaks the -a ending for an 'o', Like Rosario. Stop changing it.207.38.156.111 (talk) 01:06, 21 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]