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The link at the end of the main article to: Mount Kenya Trust page Appears to have nothing to do with the mountain. It is all about credit cards and credit history. Maybe it should be removed.

This seems to have been removed at some point. --Mehmet Karatay 11:53, 12 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

More pictures?

There is another picture of Mount Kenya available on Commons, Image:Mount Kenya.jpg. Would it fit in this article?--ZorroIII 21:28, 24 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Teleki

As I know Hungarin explorer Sámuel Teleki was the first European who stepped on Mount Kenya. --Korovioff 20:19, 21 April 2006 (UTC)

Improvement ideas

I've started improving this article in recent times. Just for the record the plan is to eventually have the following: geological history, naming of the peaks, history and current state of the glaciers, exploration/mountaineering history and a table of the major lines up the majority of the peaks. Any comments or suggestions? --Mehmet Karatay 11:53, 12 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

We are hoping to find the editions of The Times which reported Shipton and Mackinder's expeditions. If anyone has any idea please let us know. Mehmet Karatay 10:46, 24 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
The entire The Times digital archive can be accessed at the National Library of Scotland. It is a searchable database which makes finding entries very easy. Mehmet Karatay 18:07, 2 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]


Long article

I know this article is getting long. I'm trying to get the information into it before starting to split it up. If you have any concerns about this please leave a comment here. Mehmet Karatay 19:51, 14 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Mehmet: I think you are right, it is a bit long. However, I would accept your plan to fill in more information before splitting it up (just some mutual encouragement here, after the help on my article!)—GRM 20:44, 19 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

An Update: We have started working on separate sections (especially ecology) and once these are presentable the article will be split. The geology and climate sections will be added as separate articles soon. After those three our plan is to make the exploration section into its own article. Mehmet Karatay 17:25, 28 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

When we make Mount Kenya into a proper summary article we are planning on having the following sub-articles:

  • History of Mount Kenya (including the exploration, the first two ascents, the role in the Mau Mau events and anything else notable)
  • Geology of Mount Kenya (including formation of mountain and current distribution of rocks)
  • Mountaineering on Mount Kenya (notable first ascents, walking routes, climbing routes, huts, altitude problems etc.)
  • Climate of Mount Kenya (past, current, influences and effects)
  • Ecology of Mount Kenya (ecology of forest zone, moorland zone, alpine zone, etc.)
  • Geography of Mount Kenya (Peaks, Glaciers including history, Rivers, Lakes, streams etc.)
  • Culture/People of Mount Kenya (local community interactions past and present).

We also want to have the following lists: Names on the Mountain (why named and by whom), Vertebrate Fauna (maybe with a sub-list for birds). You can see the progress for these articles on our user page. Mehmet Karatay 18:07, 2 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Progress on the summary style articles is going well. The navigation bar under this message links to sandboxes where the current status of the articles can be seen. The main progress so far has been on climate, ecology and the names list.
Mehmet Karatay 16:16, 21 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Naming of Mount Kenya

I think the following section is interesting and important but I do not have proper references for parts of it except word of mouth and random webpages. I'll keep looking. These sections lacking references have been made bold. In the meantime if anyone knows of decent references then we can move it to the main page.

 Done This task has been completed. Mehmet Karatay 22:00, 12 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Mount Kenya got its current name through a series of convolutions since Krapf sited it in 1849. Various tribes have different names for the mountain. The Kĩkũyũ call it Kirinyaga, which means white or bright mountain. The Embu call it Kirenia, or mountain of whiteness. The Maasai call it Ol Donyo Eibor or Ol Donyo Egere, which mean the White mountain or the speckled mountain respectively.[1] The Wakamba call it Kiinyaa, or the mountain of the ostrich. The male ostrich has speckled tail feathers, which look similar to the speckled rock and ice on the mountain.[2][3]

Krapf was staying in a Wakamba village when he first saw the mountain[4] and so settled on the name Kenia (pronounced Keen-ya), a corruption of the Wakamba Kiinyaa.[5] Krapf spelt this as both Kenia and Kegnia.[4][6] It is important to note that at the time this referred to the mountain without having to include mountain in the name. The current name Mt Kenya was used by some as early as 1894,[7] but this was not a regular occurrence until 1920 when Kenya Colony was established. The name Mount Kenya was not the only English one for the mountain as shown in Dutton's 1929 book Kenya Mountain.[8] The spelling had modernised but the pronunciation was still keen-ya.[9] Before 1920 the area now known as Kenya was known as the British East Africa Protectorate and so there was no need to mention mount when referring to the mountain.

Kenya was given its Independence in 1963 and Jomo Kenyatta was elected as the first president. The coincidence of the spelling of his surname meant that pronunciation of Kenya changed to reflect the pronunciation of Kenyatta.[5] The country was named after colony which in turn was named after the mountain as it is a very significant landmark.[10] To distinguish easily between the country and the mountain, the mountain became known as Mount Kenya with the current pronunciation ken-ya .

Mehmet Karatay 08:21, 22 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

This website mentions that Kenya Colony was named after the mountain but doesn't give a reference.

  • I e-mailed History World and they very quickly replied to me with their reference. I will now have to find a 1972 edition of Encyclopedia Britannica as the 1974 edition seems to miss out that fact. Either that or I was being blind.

We need proper references for:

  • Kenya colony being named after Mount Kenya
    • Found this in the 1972 edition of Encyclopedia Britannica
  • The pronunciation of Kenyatta altering the pronunciation of Kenya from Keen-ya to Ken-ya
    • Found this in the Bradt Kenya travel guide, wouldn't mind a primary reference
  • More detail on how the early European explorers settled on the name Kenya i.e. the pronunciation difficulties of the local names
    • It wasn't pronunciation diffuculties, it was the fact that Krapf had Akamba porters who call the mountain kiinyaa
    • We now have a reference for the spelling changing from Kenia to Kenya

Any advice for places to look welcome. Mehmet Karatay 21:31, 6 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've made a few more changes to the passage above, and updated the status of the missing references. We're almost there now. Mehmet Karatay 11:06, 12 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ Thomson, Joseph (1968). Through Masai Land (3 ed.). London: Frank Cass & Co Ltd. {{cite book}}: Unknown parameter |origdate= ignored (|orig-date= suggested) (help)
  2. ^ Burns, Cameron (1998). Kilimanjaro & Mount Kenya; A Climbing and Trekking Guide. Leicester: Cordee. ISBN 1-871890-98-5.
  3. ^ Kenya Wildlife Service (2006), Mount Kenya Official Guidebook, Kenya Wildlife Service
  4. ^ a b Krapf, Johann Ludwig (13th May 1850). "Extract from Krapf's diary". Church Missionary Intelligencer. i: 452. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
  5. ^ a b Foottit, Claire (2006) [2004]. Kenya. The Brade Travel Guide. Bradt Travel Guides Ltd. ISBN 1-84162-066-1.
  6. ^ Krapf, Johann Ludwig (1860). Travels, Researches, and Missionary Labours in Eastern Africa. London: Frank Cass & Co. Ltd. {{cite book}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter: |coauthors= (help)
  7. ^ Gregory, J. W. (1894). "Contributions to the Geology of British East Africa.--Part I. The Glacial Geology of Mount Kenya". Quarterly Journal of the Geological Society. 50. Geological Society of London: 515–530. doi:10.1144/GSL.JGS.1894.050.01-04.36. {{cite journal}}: |access-date= requires |url= (help)
  8. ^ Dutton, E.A.T. (1929). Kenya Mountain. London: Charles Whittingham and Griggs.
  9. ^ J.H. Reynolds (Feb 08 1932). "The spelling of Kenya". Letters to the editor. The Times. No. 46051. London. col B, p. 8. {{cite news}}: Check date values in: |date= (help) template uses deprecated parameter(s) (help)
  10. ^ "Kenya". Encyclopedia Britannica. Vol. 13 (1972 ed.). pp. 304, section II, subsection 5.

There are several logical errors above. There doesn't seem to be any reason for Krapf to spell Kenia if he was trying to record the Wakamba Kiinyaa. As this explains, Krapf was most surely trying to use a fairly phonetic spelling for /kenia/. --Espoo (talk) 15:40, 8 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for tidying that up. I think it reads much better now and is more informative and neutral. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:53, 15 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Native pronunciation

The article says "original native pronunciation, the current /ˈkɛnjə/", but, as far as I know, in Swahili (and several other African languages) ny is pronounced as /ɲ/, not /nj/, and Kenya is pronounced as /ˈkɛɲə/. --81.38.179.185 (talk) 20:59, 25 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, this should be fixed/improved. And also noted that the /'kiːɲə/ pronunciation is still frequently heard in English. Maybe I'll find someone a bit better than I with IPA to add it to wikt:Kenya and then we can improve it here. Robert Ullmann (talk) 11:33, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]


"Mount Kenya History & Description" - this is a commercial link selling safaris. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.12.13.38 (talk) 18:08, 19 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. It's now gone. Feel free to remove links like that yourself when you find more. In the summary type something along the lines of "Removed advertisement spam". Mehmet Karatay (talk) 11:52, 20 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Great work

I've nominated it for GAN; I thnk that this article is up to standards (or so I think...) But in the long term, we're going to need a translate of the FA on the French wiki ResMar 00:16, 2 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'd like to point out that most of the French FA article is based on the following articles:
If someone wants to make this article fit inline with the French one then go ahead. A full translation shouldn't be needed as most of the information is already available in English through the links above. I really want to to this but don't have the time. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 08:50, 2 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I've started translating some of the svg images used by the French FA into English. These are available from commons. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:43, 2 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mount Kenya/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

I am reviewing this article's good article candidacy, and will have a full review up shortly. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 01:22, 10 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

My review is complete, and I have decided to place the article on hold for the following reasons:

I have seven concerns with referencing/inline cites:

  • All the references in the History section are in the last paragraph.
Added references and moved some information to more appropriate sections.Mehmet Karatay (talk) 07:49, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 08:18, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Added reference Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:25, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think that the second half of the single paragraph in the Gĩkũyũ section needs a reference because
  • The Ameru section has no references.
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 21:58, 14 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • The fourth paragraph in the zones section has no references.
Added reference Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:25, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • The first paragraph in the Flora section needs a reference.
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:50, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second paragraph in the Fauna needs a reference.
Added reference Mehmet Karatay (talk) 09:50, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • The first and paragraphs in the Seasons section need references.
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 21:58, 14 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:03, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:13, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second paragraph in the Sirimon Route section has no reference.
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:13, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:41, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:51, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:51, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Among the Other huts around the mountain, Mountain Rock Bantu Lodge, Naru Moru River Lodge, Naro Moru Youth Hostel, and Rutundu Log Cabins have no references.
Added references Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:51, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Among the Books about Mount Kenya, only Fuga sul Kenya/No Picnic on Mount Kenya have references. Indeed, I am not sure this section is even necessary, and removing it would be completely fine with me.
Hid this section. It can be put back in if anyone wants to improve it. For now I will focus on the other points. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 10:21, 11 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]


And three regarding coverage/comprehensiveness:

  • For the Kamweti Route, has anyone investigated why the route is the way it is, or why it may be impassable?
Updated this section. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 19:47, 14 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • The table in the Climbing routes is not complete; see for example the climbing seasons column.
Completed the table. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 20:01, 14 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • There is nothing about the geology of Mount Kenya; what kind of rock is it made out of? What is its possible eruptive history (for example, was it explosive, effusive, and so on)?
Added section on geology. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 19:31, 14 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Once these are fixed I will be happy to promote the article. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 06:06, 10 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for reviewing this article Miss Madeline. I have fixed all the suggestions you made. If there is anything else you feel needs work please let me know and I will try to sort it out. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 21:58, 14 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies for the delay in promoting it, but I think it meets the criteria now, so I am promoting it now. Good job and keep up the good work. In the meantime you might want to review some other GA nominee. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 18:12, 18 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. Mehmet Karatay (talk) 19:30, 18 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Recent changes and removals

Hi all,

Could someone please explain why it is best to remove large sections of the article? I know being bold is an important part of Wikipedia, but it seems only fair discussing major changes to the article on its talk page.

The two main sections that have been removed, or greatly reduced, are the history and the etymology. In my opinion the history is critical to any article on Mount Kenya. There is now no mention of:

  • the first ascent except for the date in the infobox at the start of the article
  • Krapf, the first European to hear of, and see, the mountain
  • Significant first ascents
  • Details of how the peaks received their names

Removed historical photos include:

  • the first ascent party on the summit
  • the portraits of the first Europeans to find the mountain
  • the picture of Lenana, the medicine man after which the third highest, and most climbed, peak is named

I feel that these changes severely reduce the quality of the article. I know that the cultural history of the mountain goes far beyond the Europeans first discovering it, but nevertheless these are significant events in the mountain's history and should therefore be included in the article.

An earlier version of the article, for comparison, is at: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mount_Kenya&oldid=360910272

Please discuss,
Mehmet Karatay (talk) 12:53, 14 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The article is about the Mountain. Please see other Mountains (Everest etc) and compare. The hitory of First Europeans to see or climb the mountains was way off-topic within the context of the article - to the point of detracting its legibility.
Britain's history can be put in an appropriate Page. Otherwise we would soon end up with irrelevancies like the first Chinese, Indian, American, Ugandan, Nigerian to see mountains, lakes, rivers, buildings etc... See my point?
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