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May 2010

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Just realised you are a new editor - hope the above helps --Snowded TALK 22:26, 2 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for your understanding, please, when you get a chance, see the content above and how it can satisfy some "consensus." Sallese (talk) 11:11, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Sallese - I came across the article you created on the Al-Muthanna club when doing some New Page Patrol and am concerned about copyright issues in this article. As you may know, Wikipedia operates under a principle that means we can't use material, including text, which is copyrighted by others unless we have the copyright owner's permission. While having a look at the online sources you used for this article, I notice you have directly copied from them in the article. For example:

...existed until the collapse of Rashid Rashid Ali al-Gaylani's coup d'etat in May 1941. The club was dedicated to the spread of pan-Arabism; its ideas were influential at the time and many of its members participated in Iraqi politics after 1945, notably in hizb al-istiqlal.

is directly lifted from Arabic political memoirs and other studies by Elie Kédourie

heavily influenced by European fascism, they formed the core of new radicals for a civilian-military Pan-Arab coalition

from Memories of state: politics, history, and collective identity in modern Iraq by Eric Davis

pan-Arab identity and animosity woward a "colonial" Britain. A central figure in introducing these ideas into Iraq's national education program was Dr. Sami Shawkat [sic]

Iran, Iraq, and the Arab Gulf States by Joseph A. Kechichian

...Dr. Sami Shawkat, the ardent Arab nationalist and cofounder of the al-Muthanna Club

The Arabs and the Axis: 1933-1940

Saib Shawkat, who served as director-general of education (1931-33, 1939; 1940) and minister of education (1940). Shawkat is well known for, among other things, his 1933 speech "The Manufacture of Death," in which he argued that the ability to cause and accept death in puruit of pan-Arab ideals was the highest calling....In 1939, he instituted Al-Futuwwa, a paramilitary youth organization named after a social organization of the Abbasid caliph al-Nasir al-din Allah. Shawkat's promotion of a nationalist education system and vanguard youth organization foreshadowed the Popular Army and youth organizations of the Baath Party four decades later.

Iran, Iraq, and the Arab Gulf States (You copy the final sentence of this section again at the end of the article)

...Al Muthanna Club in Baghdad and the Scouts movement propagated anti-Jewish propaganda

Is it just for Arabs and Muslims to deny the Holocaust?

...a mob led by al-Muthanna Club members and its youth organization attacked the Baghdad Jewish community on June 1 and 2, 1941 (Farhud Pogrom), killing and wounding several Jews and destroying considerable property

Memories of state

I am concerned that reading the offline sources you used will produce similar results. Simply mentioning the source you used is not sufficient - copying or close paraphrasing is not permitted on Wikipedia. What I have done is to replace the article for the moment with a template noting the copyright problem. I will also post a message on the article's talk page. I suspect, that for the moment, the most straightforward thing to do will be to reduce the article to a stub, which can then be built back up, using the sources but not copying them. You may also want to look at the section of your talk page above, which I notice says "Note, Much of the following information was complied by others.". Copyright violations are not allowed on user talk pages either. --Kateshortforbob talk 14:01, 1 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sallese, I have just looked at one of your edits to Fascism, chosen at random (and again here), and I notice you are doing the same thing - copying copyrighted text from Google Books. While Google Books may provide previews of books, or even complete texts, they are not neccessarily in the public domain, or released under a license which allows us to copy them. Please avoid this in future. Kateshortforbob talk 14:15, 1 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
You have been temporarily blocked from editing in accordance with Wikipedia's blocking policy for violating copyright policy by copying text into Wikipedia from another source without verifying permission. You have been previously warned that this is against policy. Once the block has expired, you are welcome to make constructive contributions. Please take this opportunity to be sure you understand our copyright policy and our policies regarding how to quote non-free text. If you believe this block is unjustified, you may contest the block by adding the text {{unblock|Your reason here}} below, but you should read our guide to appealing blocks first. Moonriddengirl (talk) 14:08, 9 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In spite of the very clear explanation above, you restored content to the now deleted article Al-Muthanna club with a note that it was "non-copyrighted". Among this was text pasted from [5] and [6]. You must understand and respect our copyright policy if you wish to contribute to Wikipedia. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 14:08, 9 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The compilation previously at the top of your talk page has been removed, as it seems also to have contained copyrighted content used in a manner inconsistent with our copyright policies, including from [7]. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 14:13, 9 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This user's unblock request has been reviewed by an administrator, who declined the request. Other administrators may also review this block, but should not override the decision without good reason (see the blocking policy).

Sallese (block logactive blocksglobal blockscontribsdeleted contribsfilter logcreation logchange block settingsunblockcheckuser (log))


Request reason:

I didn't make any "copyrighted" materuial AFTER been warned, on the contrary, I have repaired the page Al-Muthanna_club to be non-copy-righted by omitting the orioginal text, but you have just deleted that page. Sallese (talk) 03:28, 10 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Decline reason:

See below. The material was copyrighted, and you have been advised about it previously. If you file another unblock request, it would be wise to demonstrate that you have read the policies linked below, to show that you now understand your error. Taelus (Talk) 15:00, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


If you want to make any further unblock requests, please read the guide to appealing blocks first, then use the {{unblock}} template again. If you make too many unconvincing or disruptive unblock requests, you may be prevented from editing this page until your block has expired. Do not remove this unblock review while you are blocked.

Your "repairs" to the page merely seemed to rephrase parts of it slightly, and change the order of the sentance structure in places. This would however still be plagiarism, although assuming good faith you may not have been aware of this. You are not allowed to take anothers work and slightly change its layout or phrasing in order to ensure it is different. You are however allowed to use anothers work for research, and then write up an article about the topic in your own words, citing the source for information you gained from it. --Taelus (Talk) 09:26, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Taking one of the examples I linked, before blanking, the article said:

Nadi al-Muthanna and other secret societies disseminated and promoted Arab nationalist views in an attempt to mobilize public opinion in support of their ideas. The club gained a great deal of influence as its ideas began to spread in government schools. Led by Saib Shawkat and Muhammad Mahdi al-Kubba, it came to be dominated by ultranationalists. The emergence of the club reflected the rise of Arab nationalist activities in the wake of the 1936 Bakr Sidqi coup. Many Arab nationalists and reformers who had supported the coup became disenchanted with Bakr Sidqi's authoritarian and arbitrary policies. The club's members joined followers of pro-Nazi leader

When you restored it, it said:

Nadi al-Muthanna like other secret societies disseminated and promoted Arab nationalist views in an attempt to mobilize public opinion in support of their ideas. The club gained a great deal of influence as its ideas began to spread in government schools. Led by Saib Shawkat and Muhammad Mahdi al-Kubba,. The emergence of the club reflected the rise of Arab nationalist activities in the wake of the 1936 Bakr Sidqi coup Many Arab nationalists and reformers who had supported the coup became disenchanted with Bakr Sidqi's authoritarian and arbitrary policies. The club's members joined followers of pro-Nazi leader.

To make it easier to see the similarity of these passages, I have bolded in the second example the language that is identical. You have changed the word "and" to the word "like" and dropped a fragment of the third sentence. Otherwise, the passage is identical. This is a clear infringement of the source. We cannot use or closely paraphrase this text without permission of the author; you were advised of this above. It is necessary if you wish to contribute to Wikipedia that you do so in accordance with our copyright policy. This requires completely rewriting copyrighted content, unless you use brief and clearly marked quotations. As I said above, you should review our copyright policy andthe guidelines for using non-free text. You were already advised before you restored the content of Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing, which may also help you. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 11:39, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]




Al-Muthanna Club (version: June 2010)

Nadi al-Muthanna, al-Muthanna Club, A radical fascist - oriented pan-Arab & pan-Islamic society, heavily influenced by European fascism, was established in Baghdad in 1935, it was dominated by Arab nationalists pushing for pan-Arabism. Later on it was which was later renamed the National Democratic Party [1], believed to be existed from about 1937 to the collapse of pro-Nazi Rashid 'Ali al-Gaylani's coup d'etat in May 1941. [2] The club was dedicated to the spread of pan-Arabism, its ideas were influencial at the time. [3] The al-Muthanna Club members formed the core of new radicals for a civilian-military Pan-Arab coalition. [4]

Saib Shawkat

In 1938, the ardent Arab nationalist, Sami Shawkat, who was a known fascist, was appointed director-general of education, an author calls it "the sign of the times." [5]

The al-Muthanna club, under German ambassador Fritz Grobba's influence, developed a youth organization, the al-Futuwwa, modeled on European fascist lines and on Hitler Youth [6], it was founded in 1939 by then director-general of Iraq's education (al-Muthanna's co-founder) pan-Arab activist SaibShawkat, and was and under his guidance.

He's famous as well for his 1933 speech "The Manufacture of Death," in which he preached for the highest calling of acceptong death for the pan-Arabism cause, he argued that the ability to cause and accept death in puruit of pan-Arab ideals was the highest callin. it has been said, that Shawkat's path (ideology and military youth movement), influenced the Popular Army and youth organizations of the Baath Party, which appeared much later on. [7]

Shawkat, al-Sab'awi had developed strong anti-Jewish sentiments, leading to the tragedy known in colloquial Iraqi Arabic as the Farhud (Pogrom), as a result, a mob led by al-Muthanna Club members and its youth organization attacked the Jewish community of Baghdad on June 1 and 2, 1941, killing and wounding many Jews. Cite error: A <ref> tag is missing the closing </ref> (see the help page).

  1. ^ The Encyclopaedia of Islam, Volume 4, p. 125, by Sir Hamilton Alexander Rosskeen Gibb, Johannes Hendrik Kramers, Bernard Lewis, Charles Pellat, Joseph Schacht, 1954, [1]
  2. ^ Party, Government and Freedom in the Muslim world, p. 9 [2]
  3. ^ http://books.google.com/books?id=j8Vm5zexse8C&pg=PA47
  4. ^ Memories of state: politics, history, and collective identity in modern Iraq, by Eric Davis, 2005, page 74, [3]
  5. ^ Saddam Hussein and the crisis in the Gulf‎ p. 73, Judith Miller, Laurie Mylroie, Biography & Autobiography, Times Books, 1990
  6. ^ http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/middleeast/iraq/1428511/You-boys-you-are-the-seeds-from-which-our-great-President-Saddam-will-rise-again.html
  7. ^ Iran, Iraq, and the Arab Gulf States, Joseph A. Kechichian, Gustave E. von Grunebaum Center for Near Eastern Studies, lgrave Macmillan, 2001, p. 84 [4]

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