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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Graphemie (talk | contribs) at 06:24, 2 April 2014 (Needs reorganizing.: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Needs reorganizing.

Looking at this stub, work could be done to reorganize it on both the "big-picture" level and the sentence level. Restructuring so that the films Lynd directed come in order would be useful. (e.g. instead of starting with Lynd's second film and then jumping to the first). Additionally, the final paragraph includes awards/nominations in a way that is unclear and disrupts the general flow of writing. Are there particular guidelines to how that kind of information is best documented in an article? Graphemie (talk) 06:23, 2 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]