Talk:1927 FA Charity Shield

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Date	Process	Result
April 10, 2016	Good article nominee	Listed

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:1927 FA Charity Shield/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 21:10, 9 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will do this tomorrow.♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:10, 9 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

"There was a large " -there were, you sound like David Beckham!
"With only a few minutes remaining on the clock, Cardiff won a corner kick and from the cross, Len Davies tapped the ball into the net to put them ahead. " -needs an "and" here
" to form Corinthian-Casuals" =the Corinthian-Casuals?

Background

"Corinthian announced their team a few days prior to the game,[9] but subsequently goalkeeper Benjamin Howard Baker was replaced by A.M. Russell, who normally played for Cambridge University A.F.C.." -try "Corinthian announced their team a few days prior to the game, though goalkeeper Benjamin Howard Baker was subsequently replaced by A.M. Russell, who normally played for Cambridge University A.F.C.."

Match

"The Corinthians gained a corner kick early on, but Cardiff cleared. This was followed up by a further attack by the amateurs, but R.G. Jenkins' shot went straight to Tom Farquharson in the Cardiff goal. Cardiff attacked twice in quick succession, but both chances were squandered. " -rep of but, in fact the whole paragraph uses it excessively, needs a good copyedit to partly avoid it.

Post match

Is Post match or "Aftermath" preferrable?

@Miyagawa:♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:55, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Dr. Blofeld: Thanks for reviewing! - I've made those edits; I've reduced the "buts" by about two thirds overall. I double checked the Football WikiProject's MOS for matches at Wikipedia:WikiProject Football/Matches and realised that "Post match" should have been "Post-match". Miyagawa (talk) 14:14, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Pass or Fail: Looks adequate enough, given that this is the shield, not the cup. Pity they couldn't do it again!♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:17, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]