Talk:A Transfer

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Review: March 14, 2021. (Reviewed version).

A fact from A Transfer appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 7 April 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that in the Neon Genesis Evangelion episode "A Transfer", Arthur Schopenhauer's hedgehog's dilemma is mentioned?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/April. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/A Transfer.

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:A Transfer/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:08, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:08, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

In the infobox, use "plainlist" instead of "<br/>" per the rules on the template. Done
Is the "|story=Gainax" parameter necessary?
A Transfer" → "A Transfer" Done
What does "7.1% rating" mean?

It means that 7.1% of Japan's televisions were tuned to Tokyo TV during the run. I took it for granted, given the percentage.

Plot

The plot is 417 words, while it should be under 400 per WP:TVPLOT. Done
Remove the comma after "poorly for Nerv".

Removed.

Production

What exactly is "a mount" within the context of the show?

Specified.

Cultural references and themes

The caption on the image should describe its significance within the article.
Also improve the non-free use rationales of the images (see MOS:TVIMAGE for help).

Hope it helps.

"awkward communication. ... Evangelion" → "awkward communication [...] Evangelion"

Fixed.

"the sixties inspire" → "the 1960s inspired" Done
Wikipedia doesn't normally use phrases like "he said" so try rewording the sentence. Done
References should be included at the end of each quote, so recite certain sources. Done
"A transfer" → "A Transfer" Done

Reception

Again, explain what "7.1% rating" means and/or refers to.
The second reference after "home video releases" is missing parts of its title. Done
"as it shows" → "as it showed" Done

Notes and references

Change the "Notes" header to "References", add a subsection titled "Citations" and make the original "References" section into a "Bibliography" subsection (example). Done
Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool). Done
Optional, but it helps readers if you link websites within the "|website=" parameter. Done

@Some Dude From North Carolina:Tried my best.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 19:49, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 18:57, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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... the title initially proposed for the Neon Genesis Evangelion episode "A Transfer" was "The first telephone call"?Source: Neon Genesis Evangelion Theatralical VHS Box Booklet (in Japanese). King Amusement Creative. 1997.
- ALT1:... in the Neon Genesis Evangelion episode "A Transfer" Arthur Schopenhauer's Hedgehog's dilemma is mentioned?Source: Neon Genesis Evangelion Platinum Edition Booklet, volume 1, ADV.

Improved to Good Article status by TeenAngels1234 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:32, 18 March 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Article was made into a good article within 7 days of nomination and is at least 1,500 characters. It is neutral and cites sources with inline citations. I will have to assume good faith on print sources. I am more inclined to ALT1 as the original ALT doesn't seem to be eye-catching.lullabying (talk) 22:02, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Lullabying: Thank you. Forgive me, but for some reason this template is missing from the main DYNN page. Is there a reason? It's a problem? Sorry, but it's my second nomination and I still don't quite understand the mechanism.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 22:15, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@TeenAngels1234: After your nomination was approved, a bot moved it from the DYNN page to the "approved" page at WP:DYKNA (you should be able to see it there). There's a lot of approved hooks, but eventually a promoter will come by, double check the nomination, and move it to a DYK set so it can be scheduled to run on the Main Page. You should be all set in the meantime, just a matter of waiting. DanCherek (talk) 03:02, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Perfect. Thank you, of course.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 12:48, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]