Talk:André Raison

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WikiProject class rating[edit]

This article was automatically assessed because at least one article was rated and this bot brought all the other ratings up to at least that level. BetacommandBot 02:16, 27 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Composer project review[edit]

I've reviewed this article as part of the Composers project review of its B-class articles. This is a B-class article; its formatting and layout need some attention, and it needs more inline citations. My full review is on the comments page; questions and comments should be left here or on my talk page. Magic♪piano 02:02, 24 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Assessment comment[edit]

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I recommend a critical review of the score sample from "Trio en chaconne". If you compare it with the edition in WIMA you'll notice the initial motive in WIMA's edition has the notes

4g | 2d+ 8a 16g 16a | 2b

in the right hand upper part while the sample in the Wikipedia article has

4g | 2c+ 8a 16g 16a | 2b

Unfortunately I've not access to the original printing of "Livre d'Orgue". But from a music analysis point of view it seems obvious that the leading motive spans the chord on the first degree of the key in use (in practice g-minor). The 2c+ found in the Wikipedia sample seems most unlikely to me. Reccmo (talk) 11:02, 11 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]


Composers Project Assessment of André Raison: 2024-05-11

This is an assessment of article André Raison by a member of the Composers project, according to its assessment criteria. This review was done by Magicpiano.

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Adherence to overall Wikipedia standards (WP:MOS, WP:WIAGA, WP:WIAFA) are the reviewer's opinion, and are not a substitute for the Wikipedia's processes for awarding Good Article or Featured Article status.

Origins/family background/studies

Does the article reflect what is known about the composer's background and childhood? If s/he received musical training as a child, who from, is the experience and nature of the early teachers' influences described?

  • ok
Early career

Does the article indicate when s/he started composing, discuss early style, success/failure? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?

  • ok
Mature career

Does the article discuss his/her adult life and composition history? Are other pedagogic and personal influences from this time on his/her music discussed?

  • ok
List(s) of works

Are lists of the composer's works in WP, linked from this article? If there are special catalogs (e.g. Köchel for Mozart, Hoboken for Haydn), are they used? If the composer has written more than 20-30 works, any exhaustive listing should be placed in a separate article.

  • ok
Critical appreciation

Does the article discuss his/her style, reception by critics and the public (both during his/her life, and over time)?

  • ok
Illustrations and sound clips

Does the article contain images of its subject, birthplace, gravesite or other memorials, important residences, manuscript pages, museums, etc? Does it contain samples of the composer's work (as composer and/or performer, if appropriate)? (Note that since many 20th-century works are copyrighted, it may not be possible to acquire more than brief fair use samples of those works, but efforts should be made to do so.) If an article is of high enough quality, do its images and media comply with image use policy and non-free content policy? (Adherence to these is needed for Good Article or Featured Article consideration, and is apparently a common reason for nominations being quick-failed.)

  • Image, and music notation; no sound clips.
References, sources and bibliography

Does the article contain a suitable number of references? Does it contain sufficient inline citations? (For an article to pass Good Article nomination, every paragraph possibly excepting those in the lead, and every direct quotation, should have at least one footnote.) If appropriate, does it include Further Reading or Bibliography beyond the cited references?

  • Article has references; a few inline cites.
Structure and compliance with WP:MOS

Does the article comply with Wikipedia style and layout guidelines, especially WP:MOS, WP:LEAD, WP:LAYOUT, and possibly WP:SIZE? (Article length is not generally significant, although Featured Articles Candidates may be questioned for excessive length.)

  • ok
Things that may be necessary to pass a Good Article review
  • Article requires more inline citations (WP:CITE)
Summary

This is a somewhat interesting article, even if the biographic component is on the brief side. The music is reasonably well-covered; I find the large musical extract distracting; the juxtaposition of the church image; livre listing, and notation gives the page a jumbled quality.

Article is B-class; it needs some attention to format and layout (which may require additional words to fill parts out). Magic♪piano 02:00, 24 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Last edited at 02:00, 24 March 2009 (UTC). Substituted at 07:46, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

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