Talk:CISF Unit Delhi Metro Rail Corporation

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:10, 27 August 2019 (UTC)

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• ... that with the sanctioned strength of 12,000 the CISF Unit Delhi Metro Rail Corporation is the largest Central Industrial Security Force unit? Source: "India Today"
  • ALT1:... that CISF Unit Delhi Metro Rail Corporation is responsible for providing security to Delhi Metro? Source: "India Today"

Created by Deepak G Goswami (talk). Self-nominated at 04:09, 11 August 2019 (UTC).

• Created started 7 days ago but significant expansion during the week. Checks okay for citation, size, etc. I think the first, longer hook is more interesting but how about the shorter version below? Geof Sheppard (talk) 17:20, 11 August 2019 (UTC)

ALT2 (suggested by reviewer) ... that the CISF Unit Delhi Metro Rail Corporation is the largest Central Industrial Security Force unit?

Thanks for your review and suggested hook Geof. This is my first article and very first attempt for DYK nomination. Your hook is short and catchy and details should be in the article not in the hook like you have amended.-Deepak G Goswami (talk) 01:30, 12 August 2019 (UTC)