Talk:Chiou I-jen

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Headlines[edit]

I think the headlines should not be too specific, but I don't think there's a rule on this. It's just that I've never seen headlines that long.

Also, I think the intro should be expanded. Just one sentence does not make it a paragraph. Good start, though!--Jerry 19:00, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

I agree - it's definitely a rough draft. I just wanted to get something down that we could work from. I'll see what else I can find to expand the intro, and I'll pare down the topic headings a little. Feel free to tweak it if you have anything to add or change. --FolicAcid 19:05, 16 October 2007 (UTC)