Talk:Cliff Joslyn

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Worksection removed[edit]

Due to possible violation of copyright, see WP:Copyvio, I have removed the worksection of this article for now. -- Marcel Douwe Dekker (talk) 08:57, 10 October 2009 (UTC) P.S. I apologize for all inconvenience I have caused here, see also here. If you would like to assist in improving this article, please let me know. I can use all the help I can get. Thank you.

Worksection restored[edit]

As the original author of the worksection, I have restored it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 03:56, 13 January 2010 (UTC)

Yes I noticed, thanks. If I am not mistaken, I technically am still the original author of the worksection, and you the author of the three to five quotes I used. I guess the mistake I made in similar articles is, that I didn't make a clear distinction between the new text, and the original sources used. In this case, see here, I guess these problems were not that obvious, because I did used quotation-marks in three places. And for example the last text:
...Other application areas include homeland defense, critical infrastructure protection, intelligence analysis, decision support environments, risk and reliability analysis, and defense transformation. [ source: ].
This text does not have to be quoted (in quotation-marks) because it came from a (federal) government website, I guess. As you can see there is still a lot of guessing from my site. Again I am sorry for the confusion I caused. In time I want to double-check, restore, and further improve... and maybe get back on this. -- Mdd (talk) 08:34, 13 January 2010 (UTC)

Updated May 2012[edit]

Updated by the subject for accuracy and language, — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 02:39, 2 May 2012 (UTC)

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