Talk:Cristina Patwa

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Dates?

This article is missing just any reference to time, its like her career just happened in the last couple of years. I realize we are limited by our sources, but this whole thing needs work. --Scalhotrod - Just your average banjo playing, drag racing, cowboy... (talk) 01:15, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

New edit

I've twice tried to replace this article with an edit which adheres more closely to the style of other Wikipedia articles. I've added dates (as the above editor suggested) and citations, and removed content that I was unable to verify. The first time I edited the article I did it from a new user account, since I couldn't remember my password, and my edit was reverted as vandalism. I figured out my password and tried again, but I neglected to remove the userspace draft template and didn't add categories. So it was reverted again. Which I understand.

The edit is here in my sandbox: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JayneAustin/sandbox/. |GB fan - or anyone else interested -- can you help and/or take a look?

I am a Robert Rodriguez fan and Cristina Patwa is the executive producer of his new television show. I put a lot of work into this. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by JayneAustin (talk • contribs) 19:18, 21 August 2014 (UTC) JayneAustin (talk) 19:30, 21 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

What you should do is instead of doing a mass change is copy a section, paste it in, and save that section. Then do the next section the same way. It makes it easier to see what you have done rather than replacing the whole article with a new one. It is very hard to see the changes that have been made with a massive change like that. GB fan 19:33, 21 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I've made the changes as you suggested. I appreciate your help. GB fan. JayneAustin (talk) 21:41, 21 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]