Talk:Duchy of Bavaria

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§s 3 and 4 under "House of Welf" and the ends of §s 3 and 4 under "Imperial State". These sections are incomprehensible as written and need the attention of an expert on the subject to untangle them. Is there anyone out there? --Remotelysensed (talk) 08:57, 14 July 2012 (UTC)