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The article has the potential for being developed into a really good one, and am working on it too, but this still has some problems:

  • The references and citations need to imrpoved and more added as many statements have been made, of a rather flattering or controversial nature that lack verification.
  • The article needs more sections--ive added one and shall add more text to it and have also te should also be given proper refs/citations etc.
  • The quality of the language and expression also needs to be better and a fair amount of clean up is needed to remove too-frequent repetition.

in all instances ive left suggestions/markers in the main text that can be followed effectively for further development. Good wishes, AsadUK200 (talk) 12:33, 26 April 2012 (UTC)AsadK200[reply]

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