Jump to content

Talk:Gabriele Muccino

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

[edit]

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kaitlinwiggins. Peer reviewers: Laurenzazzarino, Get1432.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:59, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Possible Article Improvements

[edit]

Overall I think this article looks really good! I think one change it might benefit from is to split the "Life and Career" section into two separate sections. As it is, it is a very long section that focuses mostly on career anyways, so I think making a separate "Life" section with more detail about Gabriele outside of his work in film could be helpful to make a more well-rounded article. Maybe include any details about places he has lived, gone to school, and his family in the new section.

On a separate note, I also noticed that 5 of the 6 listed references are the same, it mght be a good idea to re-use the same citation for each time you have an in-text citation rather than creating a new one each time if it is the same reference being used. This will just help to clean up the look of the reference section.

Again like I said, I think overall it is really good. The writing is easy to follow and pleasant to read, job well done. Get1432 (talk) 04:52, 16 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I agree with what the above person stated. I think the article flowed really well and there was a ton of information to learn about this film maker. This was also easy for the reader to understand based on how the information was chunked. There was also good flow between paragraphs that helped the reader out. Overall I thought this was also really good. ````Lauren Zazzarino — Preceding unsigned comment added by Laurenzazzarino (talkcontribs) 21:45, 19 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

[edit]

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified one external link on Gabriele Muccino. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 23:50, 9 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]