Talk:German destroyer Z21 Wilhelm Heidkamp
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 19:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
And this one too. Parsecboy (talk) 19:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
- Heidkamp's article says he died in 1931
- Never thought to check when K&S said 1918.
- Most of your translated terms are "English first (German in parentheses)" but not for Kapitan zur See
- "On 9 April, the ship sank the old coastal defense ship Eidsvold with torpedoes after an attempt to get the ship to surrender failed" - lots of "the ship" in this line
- There are, aren't there?
- "first salvo that, detonated" - that comma doesn't need to be there. Parsecboy (talk) 20:07, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
- Good catch.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:34, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
- Looks good to me, happy to promote. Parsecboy (talk) 20:55, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
- Good catch.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:34, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
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