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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Gtaguines. Peer reviewers: Moogandang.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 22:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

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The article is very well organized and has all the components that it needs. The introduction is a short overview of the artist’s background and what type of artwork she does. It is a small peak into what the article entails. Something you could add to grab attention, is other people praising her artwork like quotes from them. Your Bibliography is very short and concise, which makes the article easier to read. My only suggestion would be to maybe include some information about her exhibitions, because otherwise it just looks like a large list with not much significance (such as what the exhibition was and what it contained). Your article has a very clear structure and everything is very neutral. It is great that you have a lot of references, it shows that your article is very accurate and filled with information. The sources seem reliable as well, there are some websites as well as books. Some sections are a bit longer than others, but this is also something that I struggled with, because there was not much information on the education of my artist besides what degree he had. Overall, your article is very well written, concise, well organized and presents a neutral tone throughout the whole article.

Moogandang (talk) 23:44, 26 February 2020 (UTC) Megan Dang[reply]