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This article has been checked against the following criteria for B-class status:
Referencing and citation: criterion not met Coverage and accuracy: criterion met Structure: criterion met Grammar and style: criterion met Supporting materials: criterion met

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Fokker Dr.I, such as Bongartz flew, is at http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Fokker_Dr._I_USAF.jpg. Could someone add it to article?

Georgejdorner (talk) 03:26, 20 July 2009 (UTC) Done[reply]

Possible improvements

I have done a quick assessment on the article and believe that it is currently a Start class article. I believe that it could be brought up to a B class article by addressing the following:

References: each paragraph requires an inline citation, currently there are a couple with out citations in the Service as a fighter pilot section, also there is a citation needed tag in the Early life section as there is a statement there that I'm not sure whether it is covered by the earlier citation in that paragraph. If these can be fixed up that would satisfy the citation criteria;
Coverage: the article could be expanded to discuss the subject's life between the wars and his service during World War II in more detail.

Anyway that is all so far. I have done some formatting work on the citations in order to make the article more MOS compliant. Good work so far, by the way. Just a little bit more effort and I believe that it will be a B class article. If you would like me to take another look once you have made the changes, please let me know. Cheers. — AustralianRupert (talk) 04:59, 25 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]