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Beyonce Discussing I Am... Yours
[edit]- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HjY08wk3ML8
- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KHVnt2Z1eIY
- Synopsis
- http://www.rap-up.com/2009/12/09/beyonce-in-talks-for-vegas-shows-throws-jay-z-surprise-birthday/
Done
- http://www.rap-up.com/page/2/?s=beyonce+i+am+yours
Something will go in the album article. My love is love (talk) 19:19, 1 February 2012 (UTC)
Stage and fashion
[edit]- http://www.lvrj.com/neon/52169137.html
- http://www.nytimes.com/2009/12/06/arts/music/06playlist.html
- http://www.huffingtonpost.com/mike-ragogna/emhuffpost-reviewsem-beyo_b_367138.html
- http://www.lasvegassun.com/news/2009/jul/31/beyonces-mom-beaming-pride-daughter-takes-encore-s/
My love is love (talk) 13:07, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 14:35, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
Review
[edit]- Set list
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- There's a mistake in "That's Why You Are Beautiful". Here it says that it contains excerpts of "The Beautiful Ones" by Prince. That's wrong. I've listened to the song over and over and I can't find not even a single fragment (lyrics or music) from that song. The performance is almost a carbon copy of the studio version, it only skips four lines. Other than that, it is exactly like the studio version. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 190.178.141.218 (talk) 21:41, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
- Lead
- Ok.
- Background and development
- "performed with her band, Suga Mama,"
- The lead says "The Mamas". Which one is the correct name?
- Suga Mama is the correct one.
- Show synopsis
- I made some minor fixes.
- Reception
- Separated paragraphs to ease reading.
- Broadcasts
- Linked I Am... Tour, since its only wikilinked on the lead and beginning of background, which is too far.
- No. That's WP:OVERLINK. Another article should be wiki-linked just in the lead and in the body of the article.
- "Several videos of the live performances of "Halo", "Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)" and "Scared of Lonely" were released at MTV Latin America."
- When?
Done
- When?
- "The live performance of "Halo" (2009)"
- Date is needless.
Done
- Date is needless.
- "at 9:00 PM/EST as a Thanksgiving special."
- Date is really relevant? Why don't just say:
- "On November 26, 2009, ABC Network aired a one-hour television special called Beyoncé – I Am... Yours at 9:00 PM/EST as a Thanksgiving special." → "ABC Network aired a one-hour television special called Beyoncé – I Am... Yours on November 26, 2009, as a Thanksgiving special"?
Done
- "On November 26, 2009, ABC Network aired a one-hour television special called Beyoncé – I Am... Yours at 9:00 PM/EST as a Thanksgiving special." → "ABC Network aired a one-hour television special called Beyoncé – I Am... Yours on November 26, 2009, as a Thanksgiving special"?
- Set list
- Ok.
- Reference check
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- From background
- The statement ending: "with her band, Suga Mama, and a small team of dancers." is covered by reference #2 from IMBD? I found nothing on the ref to support the entire sequence on a first check.
- Replaced.
- From background
- I think the rest of the refs are okay. Anyway i'll do a second check after this issues are answered. Until that, "on hold". Cheers! —Hahc21 03:23, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
- Good. All issues solved. Passing the article. Good work. —Hahc21 03:36, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
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