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This article needs major editing. Height and weight are trivial. Headings are used incorrectly and information is quite out of order. -- Psychless 03:28, 12 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]


Copy editing

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I removed the wording describing the Pasco Invite. That information should be included on Pasco's own page. It was overly long. The USATF external link was broken and I couldn't find an archive of it. I removed that too. I changed a number of external links to inline citations, so they appear in the ref list now.

Paragraph about girlfriend's death

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The paragraph about his girlfriend's death is out of place, not relevant, and not encyclopedic for a BLP. I'm going to remove it as I go through and copy edit this article. Gravel for breakfast (talk) 17:42, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]