Talk:Jean-Luc Moulène

This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.

If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page.

Biography: Arts and Entertainment

	Biography portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography articles
	This article is supported by the arts and entertainment work group.

Visual arts

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Visual arts, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of visual arts on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Visual artsWikipedia:WikiProject Visual artsTemplate:WikiProject Visual artsvisual arts articles

incomprehensible

I have tagged the article as "incomprehensible" because of the lead, which cites (or quotes, that isn't exactly clear, opus + one. It may well be so that this has been said about Moulène's work, but we are an encyclopedia. Our goal is not to intimidate our readers with impenetrable post-modernist jargon, but to elucidate. The lead fails in that respect. Please rewrite it in plain English. Vexations (talk) 16:40, 17 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

To clarify: The phrase "Bound within conceptual parameters" seems to come from

https://miguelabreugallery.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/JLMoulene_SelectedPress_opt.pdf, where it makes more sense because those "parameters" (perhaps better described as "conditions for its operation" are enumerated:

it must be separate and complete in itself
make clear the conditions under which it was produced
establish a direct link with that from which it has been separated

But without knowing this, that second sentence in the lead makes no sense. @Monak210: Vexations (talk) Vexations (talk) 17:44, 17 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Vexations: Thanks for the feedback. Monak210 (talk) Monak210 (talk)

Moulène's practice examines the relationship between systems and orders.

"Moulène's practice examines the relationship between systems and orders." Please explain what that means. Vexations (talk) 20:46, 18 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]