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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Windycityassassin1, AnaFromPR, Qwertyuiop4212001.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:27, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed Edits

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My team will be working on this article during these next few weeks, changes will be made by Thanksgiving. Let me know If there is anything I should knpow,

Thanks,

Qwertyuiop4212001 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Qwertyuiop4212001 (talkcontribs) 13:42, 23 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

More Minor Edits

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Under the Death and Legacy section, include a link to the Black Heritage Trail.

You don't really need a heading titled Intro. That information can go in the first section.

Include a picture: can find one in local library

The last name of the abolitionist is not consistent throughout the article.

Under Contributions to Abolitionism, provide a brief description of Massasoit Guards when you first mention it.

"The community activist work that John P Cobourn participated in was abolition related" can be phrased better.


AL — Preceding unsigned comment added by LightBrownTree (talkcontribs) 13:40, 2 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Why did you reformat all the citations and remove useful links?

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I'm going to edit the citations. Please take note. --MopTop (talk) 16:00, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I edited the citations so that they include links to the source material and use ref names that make sense so you can remember what's what when you're editing. I also made some other small changes; see MOS:SURNAME and MOS:Headings. I removed one sentence that was not cited and not about John Coburn; it seemed like it was added for the sake of adding text. --MopTop (talk) 17:49, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]