Talk:John William Atkinson
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Danger359 18:12, 29 August 2006 (UTC)The tone of the Personal History section is similar to other biographical entries in Wikipedia. This is the type of information, and style of writing, typically found in an obituary (several obituary sources need to be added - I will do this and add other entries as soon as time permits.
- There are few obits in WP written this way - if you have some examples please post them. I'll fix a few things while I'm here. Cheers Clappingsimon talk 20:41, 29 August 2006 (UTC)
Maybe change *our country* in "valued the fundamental freedoms on which *our country* was founded".