Talk:Keynsham/GA1

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:37, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Aha! Another place my ancestors came from (though it was recorded as Gloucestershire...) - anyway.... Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:37, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It is home to memorial park, - "a memorial park? or "It is home to Memorial Park,"

Capitalised as proper name

Be nice to expand the first para of History a little - you mention scattered Roman remains and then all you serve up is a couple of lousy coffins :)

Added a bit re mosaic etc

~~Again, any political colour that can be added to the governance section all the better. reads a little generic as is.~~

Added town & district council wards + parties & MP

...six left-bank fields... link or explain

Reworded

~~I don't get much of a feel for Memorial Park - is it mainly woodland or mainly open-space fields? Any other features to it?~~

Expanded this quite a bit

Culture section could be buffed some more. How long's the festival been going?

Added a bit - festival only since late 1990s

Noteworthy residents section should be converted into prose - surely there is some Bill Bailey material which can make a good intro?

Done - there are a couple of Bailey comments about Keynsham on Couchtripper but nothing I thought was right to use.

Anyway, seems a little sterile compared with some of the other Somerset towns, but not a huge amount to do. Casliber (talk · contribs) 06:01, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your edits and comments - hopefully addressed above.— Rod ^talk 21:13, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail: I ummed and aahed about this, as I feels it does lack a little something, but I don't recall seeing much else written about the town anywhere, so am happy that it is a good board coverage of available sourcing. Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:45, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]