Talk:Killing of Harambe

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Checking criteria for B class (October 2017)[edit]

1. Referencing & citations
  • This source may be unreliable.
  • Over the next 10 minutes, Harambe became increasingly "agitated and disoriented" by the screams of onlookers.
    The 10 minutes figure is not provided in given references.
  • occasionally propping him up when he sat, or pushing him down when he stood.
    Not given in source.
  • This source may be unreliable.
  • In an interview by the press, he emphasized that animals feel and have emotions just like humans do.
    I couldn't verify this.
  • All in all  well sourced and  Pass.
2. Coverage & accuracy
3. Structure
  • On September 18, 2014, Harambe was transferred to the Cincinnati Zoo and Botanical Garden to learn adult gorilla behavior and join a new social group.
    Single sentence paragraph.
  • On naming contests for newborn baby gorillas, a teenager made a petition to Dublin Zoo to name a newborn baby gorilla as "Harambe Jr." ("Harambetta" if female) after Dublin Zoo announced the newborn baby gorilla by tweet.
    Single sentence paragraph.
  • On June 16, 2017, satire news site The Onion featured an article of professional wrestler The Big Show being killed by WWE after a seven-year-old boy wandered into a steel cage during a live event in Indianapolis.
    Single sentence paragraph.
  • The Later developments section is short.
4. Grammar & style
  • Change "Dicks out for Harambe" to "dicks out for Harambe".
  • Unitalicize Vox.
  • One meme is a play on conspiracy theories, such as "Bush did Harambe"
    Then it's more than one meme.
  • The dead gorilla had 5% support in late July 2016 (ahead of Green Party nominee Jill Stein) and 2% in August 2016 (tied with Stein).
    I believe the years are redundant in this sentence.
  • after being daily targeted by trolls
    Split infinitive.
  • Harambe vs. Capcom
    One source says "vs.", one says "vs", one says "Vs".
  • Unitalicize Otaku Gang.
  • Link the first occurence of "Dublin Zoo", unlink the second.
  • Consider adding more links. (Per WP:MOS-L)
  • but she believed that zoos "with the highest standards of care" could play an important role.
    Change "but" to something else because this isn't contrasting the preceding text. Also, consider changing "could" to "can".
  • noting that a tranquilizer dart might have taken five or ten minutes to take effect
    Change "five or ten" to "five to ten".
  • Consider changing the zoo had resumed its account to the zoo resumed its account.
  • A self-described underground culture collective known as Otaku Gang
    Self-described?
  • Change entitled to titled.
5. Supporting materials
  •  infoboxes
  • Consider adding more images.
  • Otherwise,  Pass
6. Accessibility
  • Consider changing "USDA" to "United States Department of Agriculture" or "United States Department of Agriculture (USDA)".
  • The game itself is a fullgame of M.U.G.E.N, a customizable fighting game.
    What is a fullgame?
  • not checked

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Semi-protected edit request on 27 April 2018[edit]

I would like to edit this because some information is inaccurate FloppyDog343 (talk) 20:07, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

Please be more clear what information is inaccurate. -- GreenC 20:19, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 10 May 2018[edit]

Change "22 months ago, to 23 months ago." Then as of May 28th this year it will need to be 2 years ago." Mperry1993 (talk) 01:17, 10 May 2018 (UTC)

 Not done: That is part of a template and cannot be manually changed. JTP (talkcontribs) 01:41, 10 May 2018 (UTC)