Talk:Leo Burdock

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Tone

The tone of some of this article is unencyclopedic; while I do not find it to be blatant advertisement, it is boastful in sections such as:

It has lasted through a revolution, a civil war, two world wars, Ireland's recession, boom, and bust.

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Since the 1990s, Burdocks has been documenting the famous visitors on their Burdock's Hall of Fame [...] Bruce Springsteen whom they refer to as a regular, and of course Dublin band U2.

Although I think Leo Burdocks is definitenly notable and worthy of a Wikipedia article, I believe the tone can be cleaned up to fit Wikipedia. Maybe take inspiration from Supermac's. EddieASantos (talk) 19:16, 30 July 2022 (UTC)