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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Lesotho at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 12:43, 10 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]


  • "This was the fifth time of the country competing "This just reads awkwardly.
  • "being tested positive " Couldn't we just say "testing positive"?
  • I think you've got at least one misspelling of Rio de Janeiro in the background section?
  • The lead makes it sound like he was the original bronze medallist in both events before being disqualified, when it clearly wasn't the case
  • Tell us how many runners overall for both track events.
  • "athat he was tested " Lose the excess a, and change was to had.
  • Did the CAS "quash" his appeal, or did they merely deny it?

That;s it from me for here. On hold. Courcelles (talk) 13:29, 10 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]