I suggest that the article for New Jersey Route 180 be merged back into the history section for this article. There was already a huge discussion at WT:USRD concerning this article's notability and sourcing and it was delisted as a GA. It makes more sense for information about a short route to be presented within another article about a related route. Dough4872 (talk) 02:59, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
Jargon "Upon interchanging..." your average reader is not going to have the faintest clue what that means.
Reworded. ---Dough4872 17:52, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
"The road intersects CR 20 and CR 6 before it passes to the north of the Beach Haven West residential development and heads near wetlands." Heads near wetlands is awkward here and unclear as to what is meant. Do you mean "passes near"?
When was a freeway proposed for the route 72 corridor?
It was in the late 1960s, it says it in the next sentence. ---Dough4872 17:52, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
May I suggest that you make it clearer in the first sentence when this was, otherwise the reader is left kinda drifting until the next sentence. Perhaps "In the 1960s, a freeway was proposed for the Route 72 corridor. This freeway was planned to run from the Four Mile Circle ..." This has the advantage of keeping the chronology straight, as the way it's worded now it could suggest that the original proposal of the freeway was connected with the events in the previous paragraph. Ealdgyth - Talk 17:56, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed. If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on. Ealdgyth - Talk 17:26, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for the review, I have replied to the above changes. ---Dough4872 17:53, 6 December 2009 (UTC)