Talk:Organizacion Corona
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[edit]Prior content in this article duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: http://www.corona.com.co/web/Corporativo/Pages/Nuestra-historia , http://www.corona.com.co/web/Files/Uploads/Misi+%C2%A6n%20y%20Visi+%C2%A6n.pdf. Copied or closely paraphrased material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you. John of Reading (talk) 19:10, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
Potential sources
[edit]- http://www.elespectador.com/noticias/economia/revolucion-del-talento-corona-articulo-597943
- http://www.elcolombiano.com/inversiones_de_corona_seran_de_-300000_millones_en_2014-MAEC_278532
- http://www.eltiempo.com/archivo/documento/CMS-13371819
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Organizacion Corona, or Corona as it is known in Colombia, is a multinational corporation dedicated to manufacturing and distributing products and solutions for home improvement and construction that was founded in 1881 in Caldas, Antioquia, Colombia. This family-controlled company is guided by the founding values of its owners, the Echavarria family, and over the years has leveraged its expertise in non-metallic minerals to transform Corona from a dishware manufacturing operation to a diversified multinational corporation with presence in more than 50 markets around the world, including the United States. [1] Corona´s more than 15,000 employees are at the center of the company´s 29 manufacturing facilities across the United States, Mexico, Central America, Colombia and Brazil. The company consists of six business units that deliver home improvement and construction products and solutions to customers globally.[2] [3] Company History
Founding principles and company growth
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Erifenburg (talk) 18:03, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Hello, and thank you for your proposed changes.
Unfortunately, they appear to be copied or closely paraphrased from this press release. Wikipedia is an open-source project: we are licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License, which permits our readers to reuse our text for whatever purpose they desire. As a result, copyrighted text for which we lack permission to reuse is incompatible with our free license, and cannot be included in our articles except under extremely limited circumstances as detailed in the Non-free content policy. For that reason, I have also removed your proposed changes from the talk page. If you or your organization holds the copyright to your proposed text and is willing to release it under a free license, it is possible to grant Wikipedia permission for reuse by following the instructions at Wikipedia:Declaration of consent for all enquiries.
- Furthermore, the proposed text was too promotional and did not adhere to Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. Wikipedia is not a vehicle for advertising, marketing or public relations, but the tone of your submission was clearly to win over prospective customers and investors. The explanation of Corona's "corporate values" and frequent mentions of "diversification" are the strategies used to persuade investors reading a press release, but Wikipedia should not be written in the style of a press release. Wikipedia articles should be neutral, factual, and sound as if they were written by an impartial academic. I'm afraid your submission will require a thorough rewrite before it can be considered again. Thanks, Altamel (talk) 22:08, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Upon further investigation, I realized that you may happen to be the author of the press release, so I restored the text of your submission. If you are the press release author, that would negate the copyright issue, but the issue with promotionalism still stands. Altamel (talk) 22:13, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
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- ^ . El Colombiano. August 17, 2016 http://www.elcolombiano.com/negocios/loceria-colombiana-celebracion-FN4791171.
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- ^ . El Colombiano. August 17, 2016 http://www.elcolombiano.com/negocios/loceria-colombiana-celebracion-FN4791171.
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(help) - ^ . El Espectador. August 19, 2016 http://www.elespectador.com/noticias/economia/cada-hogar-colombiano-hay-un-producto-corona-articulo-650036.
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(help) - ^ "Corporate History". Corona.
- ^ . El Tiempo. August 17, 2016 http://www.eltiempo.com/economia/empresas/135-anos-de-corona/16675996.
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(help) - ^ . Medellin Herald. August 23, 2016 http://www.medellinherald.com/expcorn-2/companies/item/336-corona-born-in-antioquia-135-years-ago,-now-a-multinational-giant.
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(help) - ^ . El Espectador. August 19, 2016 http://www.elespectador.com/noticias/economia/cada-hogar-colombiano-hay-un-producto-corona-articulo-650036.
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