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Does anybody else think this article reads like an advertisement? There's also quite a bit of technical jargon. It provides essential information about the company, but it could be rewritten and streamlined for clarity and neutrality.

--SuperEditor (talk) 17:34, 14 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]