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"First pair" and "second pair" and "lucky pair" and "unlucky pair" are confusing. I'm not sure which is which, and which travelled by teleportation and which by air.
Alright, I've cleaned it up. Let me know if you have any issues with the way it's currently worded. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 22:45, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
Production and development
"Directed by Greg Colton, the episode is Colton's fourth Road to... episode to direct..." - choppy. How about 'The episode was directed by Greg Colton, who had previously directed "Road to Germany", "Road to the Multiverse" and "Road to the North Pole".'?
I used a slight variation of your sentence, to show that the episode were still "Road to" episodes. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 22:45, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
"The episode was revealed as the finale of the series' eleventh season with the premiere of "No Country Club for Old Men"." - I read the sources as saying this episode was the penultimate one, and "No Country Club for Old Men" was the finale, but they were aired one after the other.
Much better. I wonder if you could mention somewhere that this episode and "No Country Club for Old Men" were aired back-to-back and together made the season "double episode" finale. Adabow (talk) 23:40, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
I've added it into the lead and the production and development section. I think that's what you wanted. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 23:47, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
Excellent. Passing now. Well done! Adabow (talk) 00:01, 14 September 2013 (UTC)