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Good articleSol, Arena y Mar has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starSol, Arena y Mar is part of the Amarte Es un Placer (album) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
May 13, 2017Good article nomineeListed
February 9, 2020Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

Requesting reassessment

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@Starcheerspeaksnewslostwars:, Hello Starcheerspeaksnewslostwars. I was wondering if you could reassess this song article as well the other song articles from the same album (O Tú o Ninguna, Dormir Contigo, and Amarte Es un Placer (song). Thanks! Erick (talk) 20:58, 20 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Sol, Arena y Mar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:43, 24 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Initial comments:

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  • On the talk page, I would include it under the "WikiProject Jazz" since you cited jazz as a genre
  • In the infobox, generally the first genre is capitalized so I would capitalize the first 'p' in "pop"
  • In "horn-driven uptempo pop song", I would suggest linking "pop" to "Pop music"
  • "The single was released in four versions of the song" --> Could you reword this? I think it sounds choppy because both "single" and "song" are used
  • "pop recordings" --> I'd also like pop here
  • Just a suggestion: "He denied..." --> "He also denied..."
  • "and Arturo Perez.[9][1]" --> "and Arturo Perez.[1][9]"
  • "Miguel handling the productions himself." --> I don't think "production" needs to be plural; I only think you need to refer to the song itself and not the album
  • "foam at the seashore".[13][8]" --> "foam at the seashore".[8][13]"
  • "Houston Chronicle critic Joey Guerra chided the tune as a "tepid mix of blaring horns and uninspired lyrics"[12]" --> You need a period at the end of this sentence as it is currently incomplete
ON HOLD – good, solid work as always. Ping me with questions. Thank you, Carbrera (talk) 02:17, 13 May 2017 (UTC).[reply]
@Carbrera: Thanks for the review Carbera. I believe I've addressed everything that you brought up. It's a shame that I couldn't make it to the next round of the WikiCup though. :( Erick (talk) 03:27, 13 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Magiciandude – Oh no! That is a shame! You're so good at expanding articles related to latin music! It's so nice to see your passion come alive in your articles! My best wishes; hope all is good. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 04:22, 13 May 2017 (UTC).[reply]