Talk:The Incentive

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September 8, 2012 Good article nominee Listed
November 7, 2012 Good topic candidate Promoted
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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:The Incentive/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 3 September 2012 (UTC)

  • Infobox: Use {{start date}} in templates for dates
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Infobox: No guest stars?
    Unfortunately, no one big enough.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Infobox: Link The Office?
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Lede: Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Lede: Same goes for showrunner
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Lede: NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC), as per MOS:ACRO
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Plot: Direct quotes need actual references
    I think I fixed this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Production: "The official website for The Office" don't think that is important to subject. Perhaps remove.
    I kept it, as its in all the other articles. If I removed it, it would make no sense, and readers would question whether they were leaked or officially released.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Cultural references: Seems small. Expand, or merge with production
    It's a paragraph-sized section, and production and cultural references are two different things.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Reception: "%" → "percent"
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Reviews: Seems quotey. Consider paraphrasing, etc.
    Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • I did a little copy-edit, please check it, which had some typos
    Looks good.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
  • That's all, on hold for now. Good work.
  • TBrandley 03:42, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
    Think I got everything. Thank you!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
    Yep. Article looks good now. Passing. Well done! TBrandley 03:59, 8 September 2012 (UTC)