Talk:Governor's Palace, New Bern

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Please help with this article, this is my first page, and I don't really know what I'm doing.Dorkycool06 (talk) 20:38, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

I did some clean up and have seen that you expanded the article, great! well, if you need anything, please leave a message on my talk page. Please bear in mind that the article needs in-text citations (that is resources to support that particular text)Λua∫Wise (talk) 10:31, 13 January 2008 (UTC)

The bulk of the article, particularly sections re the museums and gardens, reads as though is were a pamphlet or promotional site for the visitor center rather than an ecnycyclopedia article. Please revise, removing words like "ours" and maintain proper tone. —Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 14:43, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

I think that if the article is to say that the North Carolina History Center "sets a new standard for the museum experience", then it must cite something reputable in support of this. This is a very bold statement and effectively claims that this particular museum is innovative in a world-beating way. On a promotional pamphlet this claims is dodgy but acceptable, but is not so in an encyclopedia. If a reputable citation cannot be found, then the claim should be removed. Simhedges (talk) 09:26, 22 September 2012 (UTC)