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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:War of the Antiochene Succession/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • For an article of this length the lead should at most have two paras.
Article
  • Fairly well-written, so here are a few nitpicks.
  • Maybe wikilink "suzerainty" (Background) and "emir" (First phase)
  • Duplink: Stephanie of Armenia (Aftermath)
  • Rest is flawless to my eyes. Excellently arranged and broad in coverage, bravo!
Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:32, 1 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]