Template:Did you know nominations/A Story About My Uncle
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 11:51, 8 January 2020 (UTC)
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A Story About My Uncle
... that 2012 indie video game A Story About My Uncle was developed by students of Södertörn University?Source: Shipping your first game while you're still in school: A Story About My Uncle
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Created by CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk). Self-nominated at 13:09, 15 December 2019 (UTC).
The full review will be to follow, but right now I'd suggest adding another part to the hook instead of just mentioning that it was developed at a university. Maybe a brief explanation of the game, or why the university students made it? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:09, 16 December 2019 (UTC)
- ALT1
... that the indie video game A Story About My Uncle developer's had to teach themselves how to use the game development software? - ALT2
... that the student project video game was "re-developed professionally" to publish the game in 2014?
- @Narutolovehinata5: Maybe this? ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 06:10, 17 December 2019 (UTC)
- The first new hook has potential, but I'd suggest copyediting it. Would the below wording be acceptable to you?
- ALT1a ... that the developers of the indie video game A Story About My Uncle had to teach themselves how to use Unreal Engine to produce the game?
- Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 07:06, 17 December 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Yes. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 07:15, 17 December 2019 (UTC)
- The first new hook has potential, but I'd suggest copyediting it. Would the below wording be acceptable to you?
Full review needed now that ALT1a is set. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:44, 31 December 2019 (UTC)
- Date, length and hook all OK, I'm fine with the original. However @CAPTAIN MEDUSA: a QPQ is needed. Just ping me when you've done it and I can pass it. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 16:20, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
- The C of E, Template:Did you know nominations/George Nathanael Anderson ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 12:27, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
Thank you, I'm sorry you had to wait so long for a review @CAPTAIN MEDUSA:. Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 18:41, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
- The C of E, Template:Did you know nominations/George Nathanael Anderson ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 12:27, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
- Hi, I came by to promote this, and tried to do some editing on it. The Development section is not so well-written, and the quote template needs to be expanded with the source. Who is the fellow saying this, anyway? Yoninah (talk) 23:13, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah, he is a critic; I have moved the quote to reception section. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 06:25, 8 January 2020 (UTC)