Template:Did you know nominations/Aap Kaa Hak

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 12:59, 22 August 2018 (UTC)

Aap Kaa Hak

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... that Aap Kaa Hak was a British television series offering advice to South Asian migrants in the United Kingdom?

Reviewed: Mary Fenton

Created by Philafrenzy (talk) and Whispyhistory (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 08:04, 25 July 2018 (UTC).

This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:47, 4 August 2018 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, but the hook makes it sound like the program was in English. I think it would be more interesting to say which language it was in, or even who the program hosts were. Yoninah (talk) 00:00, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing hook @Yoninah: and article Cwmhiraeth. I'm thinking, but maybe @Philafrenzy: has better hook.

Alt1... that British TV series Aap Kaa Hak was broadcast in Hindi and Urdu by Indian Shiv Pande and Pakistani Mukhtar Hussain?
Alt2... that British TV series Aap Kaa Hak answered health, social and legal issues in Hindi and Urdu? Whispyhistory (talk) 06:59, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
Alt3... that Aap Kaa Hak (This is Your Right) was a British television series broadcast in Hindi and Urdu and hosted by an Indian-born doctor and a Pakistan-born lawyer? Philafrenzy (talk)

ALT4: ... that an Indian-born physician and a Pakistan-born lawyer answered South Asian immigrants' questions on the British television series Aap Kaa Hak?
ALT5: ... that presenters on the British television series Aap Kaa Hak answered immigrants' questions in Hindi and Urdu? Yoninah (talk) 22:14, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

All these hooks would be satisfactory but I favour ALT2 or ALT5 as not being too wordy and in having the programme's name near the start. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:44, 22 August 2018 (UTC)