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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 18:26, 24 March 2020 (UTC)

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Corona Rintawan

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Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 20:45, 13 March 2020 (UTC).

@Juxlos: The article is new enough for a DYK and passes everything, but I think the hook can be improved like this
ALT2: ... that Corona, named after Corona, is leading Muhammadiyah's medical response to coronavirus? - Jon698 (talk) 02:20, 21 March 2020 (UTC)
Jon698 I guess ALT2 could work as a more "serious" hook, but I feel that if we're going to go for a "quirky" hook then ALT1 would be better (besides, most readers wouldn't know what Muhammadiyah is). Juxlos (talk) 02:09, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
Juxlos How about this? ALT3: ... that Corona, named after the Toyota Corona, is helping to fight the coronavirus? - Jon698 (talk) 02:13, 22 March 2020 (UTC)
Jon698 I feel that "Toyota Corona" is a bit out of place there. Honestly there's no way we can really avoid a quirky hook here (the lowest hanging fruit in the pandemic), and I think ALT1 is the best delivery. Juxlos (talk) 02:15, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

General eligibility:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.
Overall: Alt1 approved Jon698 (talk) 02:17, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
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