Template:Did you know nominations/Cruz Pérez Cuéllar

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:21, 3 October 2018 (UTC)

Cruz Pérez Cuéllar[edit]

5x expanded by Raymie (talk). Self-nominated at 00:47, 12 August 2018 (UTC).

  • Duarte has not been tried in court, and therefore the hook is a BLP violation. Yoninah (talk) 12:46, 7 September 2018 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: Alright, good to know. Would this still be the case even if this piece of evidence came up during the trial of one of Duarte's associates? (Source) In any event, I'll suggest an ALT1: Raymie (tc) 15:38, 7 September 2018 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that Cruz Pérez Cuéllar promoted participatory budgeting and a statewide network of child-care centers when he ran for Governor of Chihuahua in 2016?
@Raymie: unless Duarte is convicted in court, I don't think we can mention his alleged crimes. Thank you for the hook, but the hooky part of that sentence in the article is:
  • @Yoninah: I'd be fine with that, even if it's starting to become a more common policy plank in some places. Raymie (tc) 07:57, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Full review needed. Yoninah (talk) 10:40, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
  • Article is long/new enough, hook checks out, no obvious copyright violations (checked in Spanish), written in NPOV, no tags/disputes, and QPQ is done. Few things before we promote this. There is some info in the infobox that is unsourced/not cited elsewhere in the body paragraphs: DOB, POB, Patricio Martínez García, Gustavo Madero Muñoz, and the day he assumed office (1 September 2018). Please add them in the body, that way we don't have to clog the infobox per WP:INFOBOXCITE. I will also strongly recommend expanding the lead with 2–3 sentences. I'm worried it might get flagged by some editors once it makes it to the Main Page. Please ping me when this is done. Great job with this article. MX () 00:20, 28 September 2018 (UTC)
  • Also, the lead mentions the National Regeneration Movement (Morena) and the infobox has that too, but there is no mention of this elsewhere. It is confusing because it cites Movimiento Cuidadano almost at the end, and it is unclear how he ended up at Morena. MX () 00:28, 28 September 2018 (UTC)
  • @MX: I've added some more citations to the infobox and that portion near the end (the predecessor can't be cited to one link — as a general rule, I list the predecessor as the majority ticket representative of the same gender that preceded them) that should remedy the problem. I also updated the SIL link. Raymie (tc) 00:56, 28 September 2018 (UTC)
  • Issues needed for promotion have been addressed. I still think the lead should be expanded a bit, but that is not a requirement at DYK. Spanish is my native language so I was able to verify the hook (no need for AGF tick). MX () 01:10, 28 September 2018 (UTC)